Tanka Collection
Viewing comments for Chapter 94 "~ Deep in Dew ~"Romantic Tanka Poems
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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
The flower, poppy, is so greatly received here in the United Sates because they represent Memorial Day. Memorial Day is an honored day for armed forces. Your poem is gorgeous.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2023
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The flower, poppy, is so greatly received here in the United Sates because they represent Memorial Day. Memorial Day is an honored day for armed forces. Your poem is gorgeous.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much for the wonderful 5 stars review. May you have a beautiful day.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
I love that the field of poppies still hold those childhood dreams that came true. I'm so glad that you moved away and settled in California so we could meet you here!
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2023
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I love that the field of poppies still hold those childhood dreams that came true. I'm so glad that you moved away and settled in California so we could meet you here!
Comment Written 23-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2023
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Thank you, Big Sister. I am glad I moved to California, I wouldn't have my beautiful children and grandchildren; also, I wouldn't have a wonderful friend like you. Everything happens for a reason.
Love you,
MariVal
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Comment from AP Apgar
I like your tanks poem- good picture presentation- good flow especially in the last stanza- nice - red poppies prevalent in Spain
Vs the gold poppies of California- very beautiful- reminiscent of your own childhood if I remember correctly/ good job AP
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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2023
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I like your tanks poem- good picture presentation- good flow especially in the last stanza- nice - red poppies prevalent in Spain
Vs the gold poppies of California- very beautiful- reminiscent of your own childhood if I remember correctly/ good job AP
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Comment Written 23-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much, AP. I appreciate that you took the time to review my poem.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from jmdg1954
Hopefully you made it to California someday after you moved here.
I enjoyed reading your poem and appreciated to color scheme of red on black!
John
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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2023
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Hopefully you made it to California someday after you moved here.
I enjoyed reading your poem and appreciated to color scheme of red on black!
John
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Comment Written 23-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2023
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Yes, I moved to California on my 16th birthday and I have been here ever since. Thank you very much, jmdg. I appreciate that you took the time to review my poem.
Gypsy hugs