None Shall Pass
if I'm lyin', I'm dyin'30 total reviews
Comment from Douglas Goff
She would have taken you down in a full-nelson wretling move if you had said yes. Seems like granny had some gumption.
I think this is a great entry for the True Story Flash Fiction. Well played and good luck.
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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
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She would have taken you down in a full-nelson wretling move if you had said yes. Seems like granny had some gumption.
I think this is a great entry for the True Story Flash Fiction. Well played and good luck.
D
Comment Written 20-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from country ranch writer
This is funny she probably was serious as a heart attack when she put the question to you. Be glad you hadn't said ,"yes " just kidding..Fruday 1/20/2023. Enjoy your weekend.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
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This is funny she probably was serious as a heart attack when she put the question to you. Be glad you hadn't said ,"yes " just kidding..Fruday 1/20/2023. Enjoy your weekend.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2023
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Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is amusing. You make it seem as if it just happened, and you lied like a rug about the Trump part. She seems to be a formidable gatekeeper. I hope the interview went well.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
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This is amusing. You make it seem as if it just happened, and you lied like a rug about the Trump part. She seems to be a formidable gatekeeper. I hope the interview went well.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work. Actually I didn't lie, I don't cover politics.
Comment from JT traveller
What a fascinating tale. As an Australian I wonder if you live in a Republican favouring state? The US political system is probably just as confusing and contentious as ours. A well written piece. I do like the last sentence the best. It leaves the reader wanting more.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
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What a fascinating tale. As an Australian I wonder if you live in a Republican favouring state? The US political system is probably just as confusing and contentious as ours. A well written piece. I do like the last sentence the best. It leaves the reader wanting more.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work. I do live in a predominately conservative area.
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Thanks for your response. Have a great weekend.
Comment from jmdg1954
I guess there are times ya gotta do just what ya gotta do in order to get the job done.
This was a simple written true story flash. I'm sure we've all been in similar situations .
Good luck in the contest.
Cheers. John
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
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I guess there are times ya gotta do just what ya gotta do in order to get the job done.
This was a simple written true story flash. I'm sure we've all been in similar situations .
Good luck in the contest.
Cheers. John
Comment Written 19-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much John. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from prettybluebirds
This gave me a laugh too. I do wonder what would have happened if you had given her the wrong answer. I love the picture you included with the writing. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
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This gave me a laugh too. I do wonder what would have happened if you had given her the wrong answer. I love the picture you included with the writing. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2023
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Comment from Terry Broxson
LOL, yes indeed, I do think you gave the right answer that day. This is a good entry for this flash fiction contest, good luck. Maybe someday you can share your interview with the veteran. Good work. Terry.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
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LOL, yes indeed, I do think you gave the right answer that day. This is a good entry for this flash fiction contest, good luck. Maybe someday you can share your interview with the veteran. Good work. Terry.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much Terry. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
As I read this contest entry, I did smile. I can understand this sweet littler old lady's point. I hope a good interview did happen. I enjoyed reading and wish you the best of luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
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As I read this contest entry, I did smile. I can understand this sweet littler old lady's point. I hope a good interview did happen. I enjoyed reading and wish you the best of luck with the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2023
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Comment from poetwatch
Good one, Earl. :) I would also wonder what would have happened. I believe that women are stronger than men when their minds are made up. Anyway, I like the lady and also the World War 11 veteran for standing his ground and saying it like it is. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
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Good one, Earl. :) I would also wonder what would have happened. I believe that women are stronger than men when their minds are made up. Anyway, I like the lady and also the World War 11 veteran for standing his ground and saying it like it is. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2023
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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Haha, I believe she'd said a few choice words, then slammed the
door. I enjoyed your fun contest entry, Earl. You set up the twist
at the end well.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
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Haha, I believe she'd said a few choice words, then slammed the
door. I enjoyed your fun contest entry, Earl. You set up the twist
at the end well.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 19-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much Jan. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.