One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Your images are attractive. I like how you download the flower images toward the bottom of the poem. The Japanese poem tells us that the person is resting until they wake again. The doves are resting on a branch of the tree.
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Your images are attractive. I like how you download the flower images toward the bottom of the poem. The Japanese poem tells us that the person is resting until they wake again. The doves are resting on a branch of the tree.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much, Rosemary. I appreciate your time and kind words.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment from aryr
Good luck wishes regarding the contest entry, Gypsy. What a wonderful haiku. The dual picture were awesome and your words were so true and meant so much to me. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!
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Good luck wishes regarding the contest entry, Gypsy. What a wonderful haiku. The dual picture were awesome and your words were so true and meant so much to me. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much, Aryr. I appreciate your time and kind words. Blessed be.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment from susand3022
Wow, this is really tactile. I really liked that you started with something really soft, went to this hard cold marble, then back to this warm soft feathery feeling.
Very nice...
Susan :)
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Wow, this is really tactile. I really liked that you started with something really soft, went to this hard cold marble, then back to this warm soft feathery feeling.
Very nice...
Susan :)
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Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
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Susan,
Thank you for the exceptional five stars review and kind words. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment from JT traveller
Life is transient. We all tend to forget this until faced with illness ourselves. Well composed. The Haiku has a natural flow and reminds us of the fragility of life.
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Life is transient. We all tend to forget this until faced with illness ourselves. Well composed. The Haiku has a natural flow and reminds us of the fragility of life.
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Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
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Jacqueline,
Thank you for the exceptional five stars review and kind words. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis