Heart Crafted Poems - 2023
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Constant change"Musing of an old man
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Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written three line poem about nature. Rhymes well. Beautiful photo choice to compliment your words as well. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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This is a nicely written three line poem about nature. Rhymes well. Beautiful photo choice to compliment your words as well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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Joanne, I am honored thank you!
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Your welcome
Comment from Raul1
I believe that change is the main key for life bringing people back to happiness. Excellent work! No mistakes found in your poetry. Nice job. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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I believe that change is the main key for life bringing people back to happiness. Excellent work! No mistakes found in your poetry. Nice job. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 05-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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Thanks Raul
Comment from Celyn
This is a well written poem that follows the regulations of the three line poetry contest - well done. I like the idea behind the poem, ie that even in winter trees are undergoing some changes that we do not see. I don't quite see the connection with man though. Do you mean that man undergoes constant change as well perhaps?
Nevertheless this poem reads well so good luck with it
Celyn
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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This is a well written poem that follows the regulations of the three line poetry contest - well done. I like the idea behind the poem, ie that even in winter trees are undergoing some changes that we do not see. I don't quite see the connection with man though. Do you mean that man undergoes constant change as well perhaps?
Nevertheless this poem reads well so good luck with it
Celyn
Comment Written 05-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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yes, that is the intended correlation. Whether mind, body, spirit man and woman are in constant stages of change quite unseen often.
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Jim,
This is a quick insightful poem that reminds us things are changing on the inside and outside at all times even if we don't see them.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in the contest.
Joan
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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Hi Jim,
This is a quick insightful poem that reminds us things are changing on the inside and outside at all times even if we don't see them.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in the contest.
Joan
Comment Written 05-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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Joan, thank you!
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No problem, Jim.
Joan
Comment from Jasmine Girl
I just too another five beautiful snow laden trees picture today. It has been like this for a month. Snow and snow. Fortunately we love skiing. We went for skiing today in a perfect 30F. It will be like this in the next ten days at least. It seems no change. But the change is gradual. I can't wait for our trip to Spain in February to have some sunshine.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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I just too another five beautiful snow laden trees picture today. It has been like this for a month. Snow and snow. Fortunately we love skiing. We went for skiing today in a perfect 30F. It will be like this in the next ten days at least. It seems no change. But the change is gradual. I can't wait for our trip to Spain in February to have some sunshine.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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Jasmine girl, I will be most jealous of your pending Mediterranean escape on February. 🎶🎶🎶🙏🙏🙏
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-7, Constant Change, has the proper formatting and seems to compare man with the steady and constant oak, which endures what others cannot and survives,
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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This 5-7-7, Constant Change, has the proper formatting and seems to compare man with the steady and constant oak, which endures what others cannot and survives,
Comment Written 05-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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Thanks 🙏
Comment from Sugarray77
Well said in your philosophical verse from he 3 Line contest. I agree with your sentiment and I also liked how you bonded the piece and used stark artwork to enhance it. Great job and good luck, my friend.
Melissa
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
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Well said in your philosophical verse from he 3 Line contest. I agree with your sentiment and I also liked how you bonded the piece and used stark artwork to enhance it. Great job and good luck, my friend.
Melissa
Comment Written 05-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
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My sincere thank you!
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Oops, Jim, so sorry for the typos... bonded was meant to be bolded... autocorrect ugh! :)
Melissa
Comment from Tom Horonzy
change - inevitable. A new gray air, a lb, gained or lost similar to memories made or forgotten. ...............................................................................................
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
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change - inevitable. A new gray air, a lb, gained or lost similar to memories made or forgotten. ...............................................................................................
Comment Written 05-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
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So correct!
Comment from June Sargent
So true. Change is inevitable, but we can anchor ourselves and survive it all like that sturdy oak tree. Not easy sometimes...a lot of food for thought in a short piece.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
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So true. Change is inevitable, but we can anchor ourselves and survive it all like that sturdy oak tree. Not easy sometimes...a lot of food for thought in a short piece.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
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June, I agree fully, at times change is overwhelming.
Comment from Karyn2
A wonderful 3 line poem! I love the personification of winter and the idea that it's grasping hold of the tree's life. I like too the thoughts that while it can't be seen, change is taking place with a parallel that change happens in our lives sometimes in the seasons of waiting. Great word choices and imagery here!
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
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A wonderful 3 line poem! I love the personification of winter and the idea that it's grasping hold of the tree's life. I like too the thoughts that while it can't be seen, change is taking place with a parallel that change happens in our lives sometimes in the seasons of waiting. Great word choices and imagery here!
Comment Written 05-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
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Thank you.