One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from kahpot
How beautifully written and presented, your artwork choice is excellent as we imagine all those sapphires drifting to shore, and the water so serene, a wonderful read****kahpot
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How beautifully written and presented, your artwork choice is excellent as we imagine all those sapphires drifting to shore, and the water so serene, a wonderful read****kahpot
Comment Written 02-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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Kym, thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." --Novalis
Comment from aryr
The dual pictures were amazing, Gypsy. The first one of the full moon was awesome and the second one of the gem was spectacular. Your words were wonderful. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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The dual pictures were amazing, Gypsy. The first one of the full moon was awesome and the second one of the gem was spectacular. Your words were wonderful. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!
Comment Written 02-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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Aryr, thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." --Novalis
Comment from Jasmine Girl
What a colorful poem. I like all different shades of blue, green and a hint of purple.
Drizzle and drift are great words to use here for action and alliteration. I like all alliterations here.
Excellent.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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What a colorful poem. I like all different shades of blue, green and a hint of purple.
Drizzle and drift are great words to use here for action and alliteration. I like all alliterations here.
Excellent.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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Lisa, thank you very much for your time, exceptional six stars review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." --Novalis
Comment from jmdg1954
Nog only did I find you haiku intriguing, your authors note were most interesting also.
I either knew and forgot or didn't know all those names for the full moon.
Thanks for posting. I enjoyed it.
Cheers. John
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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Nog only did I find you haiku intriguing, your authors note were most interesting also.
I either knew and forgot or didn't know all those names for the full moon.
Thanks for posting. I enjoyed it.
Cheers. John
Comment Written 02-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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John, thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Cheers!
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." --Novalis
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Not only did you present a complete package for us, but you included a listing of all 2023's full moon names. That's really special. Thank you for the beautiful artwork and poem. I enjoyed both.
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Not only did you present a complete package for us, but you included a listing of all 2023's full moon names. That's really special. Thank you for the beautiful artwork and poem. I enjoyed both.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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Barbara, thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." --Novalis
Comment from royowen
What a cleverly written and presented post dear Gypsy, the artwork is something to die for, and you always write it so well dear friend, well done .Gypsy, blessings Roy
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What a cleverly written and presented post dear Gypsy, the artwork is something to die for, and you always write it so well dear friend, well done .Gypsy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 02-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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Roy, thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." --Novalis
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Bless you
Comment from prettybluebirds
Thank you for sharing the native moon calendar with us. I found it most interesting. Your poetry is lovely, as usual, and the artwork is spectacular, also as usual.
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Thank you for sharing the native moon calendar with us. I found it most interesting. Your poetry is lovely, as usual, and the artwork is spectacular, also as usual.
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Comment Written 02-Jan-2023
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Pretty blue birds, thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." --Novalis
Comment from Bill Schott
This haiku, First Full Moon, presented with a 4-8-5 formatting, makes the ethereal treasures of vision into the metaphorical gems floating in to rest on the beach. Nice.
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This haiku, First Full Moon, presented with a 4-8-5 formatting, makes the ethereal treasures of vision into the metaphorical gems floating in to rest on the beach. Nice.
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Comment Written 02-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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Bill, thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." --Novalis