Tanka Collection
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Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy----and do you truly believe you can fly? That's as crazy as believing anything those Trumpers believe--what, it isn't meant to be literal? Oh, never mind!
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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2022
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Another fine poem, Gypsy----and do you truly believe you can fly? That's as crazy as believing anything those Trumpers believe--what, it isn't meant to be literal? Oh, never mind!
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Comment Written 23-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much, Mike, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Happy Holidays!
Gypsy Sensei
Word Weaver
Comment from lyenochka
You captured the "yearning" feeling well that starts from gliding over the mountain and then running through the "cotton candy clouds." All of nature's sounds and feelings echo the yearning.
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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2022
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You captured the "yearning" feeling well that starts from gliding over the mountain and then running through the "cotton candy clouds." All of nature's sounds and feelings echo the yearning.
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Comment Written 23-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2022
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Thank you, Big Sister, you always get my poems. I hope you are enjoying time with your mom. How is she doing with the computer?
Love,
Gypsy Sensei
Word Weaver