Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

Your poem is a reminder to Dads, that's what they do with his children when walking along the beach or fishing. Stone skipping is one thing they enjoy doing together.

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 20-Dec-2022

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

Gypsy

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Thank you, sweet MariVal! Appreciate your thoughtfulness and how you understand what I'm going through as these "ripples of recalling Dad" are an all day thing this month.

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 Comment Written 19-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 20-Dec-2022

You're welcome, big sister, you are in my heart and thoughts, may God be with you.

Thank you very much for your lovely review.

Love,

Marival ❤️

reply by lyenochka on 20-Dec-2022

Thank you! Love and hugs back!! 💖

Comment from Ginda Simpson

Excellent

Thank you for introducing me to senryu poetry. With an economy of words, you paint a portrait of your relationship with your Dad, and a special memory.

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 Comment Written 19-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 20-Dec-2022

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

Gypsy