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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
We need to remember the everlasting saying, just be yourself. Robots are very scary machines. We have two legs, some robots have four or six legs. Why would someone want a robot when people want to work to support their families? In the future, I am sure there will be these types of machines instead of people.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2022
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We need to remember the everlasting saying, just be yourself. Robots are very scary machines. We have two legs, some robots have four or six legs. Why would someone want a robot when people want to work to support their families? In the future, I am sure there will be these types of machines instead of people.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2022
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This poem is a joke... perhaps satire. The truth is that a robots/machines could never replace a poet's heart and soul.
Thank you very much for your time and kind review. I appreciate your feedback.
Gypsy Sensei
Comment from Ricky1024
A Future World rin mainly bu Robotics?
The thought has existed since the Jetsons TV show but there has been an awful lot of changes in many sectors including banking and Telecommunications.
Interesting subject for a Haiku.
Doctor Ricky1024
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2022
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A Future World rin mainly bu Robotics?
The thought has existed since the Jetsons TV show but there has been an awful lot of changes in many sectors including banking and Telecommunications.
Interesting subject for a Haiku.
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment Written 16-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy Sensei
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your haiku poem- cute picture presentation- good word count and good connection between lines- fired poet / replaced by a robot made in Japan- must be an American modern poet that doesn't adhere to a strict 5/7/5 line count? Actually the have gotten writings from AI to see what they think- they got bored with it quickly and wrote there own language- we couldn't understand- hope for dumb earthling poets!!Good job! AP
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2022
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I like your haiku poem- cute picture presentation- good word count and good connection between lines- fired poet / replaced by a robot made in Japan- must be an American modern poet that doesn't adhere to a strict 5/7/5 line count? Actually the have gotten writings from AI to see what they think- they got bored with it quickly and wrote there own language- we couldn't understand- hope for dumb earthling poets!!Good job! AP
Comment Written 16-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy Sensei
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It has been suggested to me before that a robot could write poetry but I doubt that would ever happen as the human brain is complex and a computer just cannot compete, a poignant write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2022
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It has been suggested to me before that a robot could write poetry but I doubt that would ever happen as the human brain is complex and a computer just cannot compete, a poignant write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2022
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I doubt it to. Poets have souls. It's just a joke.
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy Sensei
Comment from Mark D. R.
Gypsy,
The computers can successfully play chess against the world masters, but I sincerely doubt that your Haiku robot will ever become true.
Regardless, it is a terrific poem!
Mark
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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Gypsy,
The computers can successfully play chess against the world masters, but I sincerely doubt that your Haiku robot will ever become true.
Regardless, it is a terrific poem!
Mark
Comment Written 16-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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It's a joke.
Thank you very much, Mark. I appreciate your excellent review.
Gypsy Sensei
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
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I know. It is still funny to consider how a computer program could create a poem as complex as a Haiku.
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Another reviewer, Gloria, said that there are haiku robots. She wrote an example but I forgot. It was not to bad but needs a lot of editing lol
Comment from RodG
Oh, I like your sardonic tone in this haiku. You suggest what many of us fear: machines (aka robots) will replace us all. Your last line is great irony as many admire the Japanese for their singular technology. Rod
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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Oh, I like your sardonic tone in this haiku. You suggest what many of us fear: machines (aka robots) will replace us all. Your last line is great irony as many admire the Japanese for their singular technology. Rod
Comment Written 16-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much, Rod. I appreciate your excellent review.
Gypsy Sensei
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
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My pleasure.
Comment from Bill Schott
This haiku, Fired Haiku Poet, presented with a 5-6-4 formatting, suggests that poetry is being farmed out to AI. I think for our own selves we should write stuff that his above a robot's ability.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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This haiku, Fired Haiku Poet, presented with a 5-6-4 formatting, suggests that poetry is being farmed out to AI. I think for our own selves we should write stuff that his above a robot's ability.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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Its a joke. In reality, a robot wouldn't know the art of poetry.
Thank you very much, Bill. I appreciate your excellent review.
Gypsy Sensei
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment from Thomas Blanks
Well, of course! If it wasn't made in Japan, it wouldn't be able to write decent haiku. It would just be Western imitation crap, LOL. It's like trying to find decent sushi in an airport or Bar-B-Q in New York City.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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Well, of course! If it wasn't made in Japan, it wouldn't be able to write decent haiku. It would just be Western imitation crap, LOL. It's like trying to find decent sushi in an airport or Bar-B-Q in New York City.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much, Thomas. I appreciate your six stars review.
Gypsy Sensei
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment from lyenochka
Lol. I remember in the 1970s when everything was "made in Japan." And when US buyers started avoiding those manufacturers, they created a city called Usa in Japan and wrote "Made in USA" in Japan. Lol.
I'm sure the robot haiku poet will do only what the programmer directed it to say.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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Lol. I remember in the 1970s when everything was "made in Japan." And when US buyers started avoiding those manufacturers, they created a city called Usa in Japan and wrote "Made in USA" in Japan. Lol.
I'm sure the robot haiku poet will do only what the programmer directed it to say.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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I didn't know about "usa" town. .. how smart and sneaky lol
Thank you very much, big sister. I appreciate your kind and funny review.
Marival ❤️
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I know Haiku started in Japan, and I know Japan is way ahead of us in computer knowledge, so I am in no way surprised. LOL Thank you for sharing this adorable poem with us.
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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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I know Haiku started in Japan, and I know Japan is way ahead of us in computer knowledge, so I am in no way surprised. LOL Thank you for sharing this adorable poem with us.
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Comment Written 16-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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LoL I'm happy you like it. Thank you, Barbara.
Gypsy Sensei
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus