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Comment from Terry Broxson
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I am not familiar with the song. But I had Alexa play for me a couple of times. I must admit I think you did a good job fitting the poem's words to the music. I think that takes some real talent, so I was not surprised! Good work. Terry.

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
    Terry, you are not familiar with Billy Joel's, 'Still Rock n Roll to me?' Or maybe you aren't a Billy Joel fan. Actually I have been to every concert I could get to, which adds up to 5 times. Regardless, I do appreciate your kind comments, my friend. Thanks again! Debi
reply by Terry Broxson on 16-Dec-2022
    That is the difference between our ages; by the time Billy Joel came along, I was into Country, the outlaws, Willie, Waylon, and the boys!
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
    Now you are speaking my language on the other 6 days of the week. I was all rock and roll until 40, but fell for Willie Nelson's music big-time and still love it so much. Another one I have seen in concert many times. Of course my kids have always been Country, like their dad, so much that can you believe that when Waylon Jennings died, all their friends had a memorial service of their own. I also am big time Johnny Cash and the others; all the highway men.... However when it comes to Billy Joel, it's still rock n roll to me.
reply by Terry Broxson on 16-Dec-2022
    Country became rock and roll
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
    So you probably believe like Glen, that today's Country isn't really Country. Glen likes the twing twangy, stuffed nose sounding, Hank Williams music. I have to leave the room at that and most Blue Grass, but I do like Hank Jr. my favorite one of his is, "Are you ready for some football!"
Comment from Bill Schott
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This parody of the Billy Joel hit is a funny Christmas edition that makes me laugh. "It's Still Christmas Eve to Me" has a great voice that is bound to be a hit of its own if posted or released.

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
    Awe Bill, I just love your way of thinking and can't thank you enough for your awesome comments I appreciate your kindness and gracious six stars. T. Thanks again my dear fried!
Comment from Goodadvicechan
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I like the picture of four Santas. Strangely it gives me a feeling of hope that if for any reason I don't like the gifts from one, there is always hope from the second.

There are a couple of lines that hit on me.

"Ya Think at my age, I should be dead." Growing old is no fun. Many a tines, I feel
Like I am on borrowing times... on the other hands, it brings back good memories.

""Everybody's thinkin,' that they can do better." I believe in everybody can do better as long as they have a goal and don't give up.

Thanks for sharing this piece with us.

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
    I love your cute comment about the Santas and maybe getting what you want from the others if one doesn't appeal to you.

    I appreciate your very kind comments for my song/poem.

    Thanks so much for all your insightful looks into my song. Growing old was something that my grandparents did long ago, this wasn't suppose to happen to me so fast. Lol.... and that we can all do better. I believe the same, my dear friend. So good to hear from you again.
    Debi
Comment from Sanku
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Though I am not familiar with the song I enjoyed your'rewritten song ' very much .It has a nice rhythm and ideally suited to sing in parties. all the best for the contest.

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
    My dearest Santha, Thanks so much for the very kind comments about my song/poem Also for the good wishes for the contest. It's in the booth right now, so we will see how it does.

    I apologize wholeheartedly for there not being a video for you to listen to. There was one on here and for some reason it had an error message, so we removed and weren't able to put it back . Here is a link to the song.

    https://youtu.be/iBbo0slWMW4

    Thanks again for the very sweet comments my dear friend.
Comment from Sherry SG
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This was such a fun read, especially as I played the peppy, original song as I read your version. A creative, entertaining perspective indeed. I enjoyed reading this.

Here's the YouTube link for the original song:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XEm3Kx7bAxo

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
    Thanks you so much Sherry. I I truly appreciate your kind comments about my song. I had a YouTube video up with this, but it ended up up with some errors and we had to take it down. I do appreciate you sending me the link and I will try it when I am done here. But I have listened to every YouTube one of all his songs because I am such a fan. I even went to five of his concerts throughout the years.. Thanks again my friend!
Comment from LJbutterfly
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Very well done! I was afraid I wouldn't recognize the song based on the lyrics. But your opening line let me know exactly what the song was. I was even able to sing along with your new lyrics. This was well done, and humorous. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2022
    Thank you so much Lorraine! I had a video, but it stopped working so had to come down. So I am so happy you were able to follow along. The contest is in the voting booth as of this afternoon, but .I think is done yet tonight. And I don't recall them ever closing so fast. But thank you for your best wishes.
    I thank you so much for the lovely comments for my poem. As always, you are so sweet. Thanks again my dear friend.
Comment from GWHARGIS
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This was awesome. I think you should send it to Billy Joel. He'd probably get a kick out of it. I really liked this. Not one single line seemed forced. Just a fun, well written lyrical poem. Gretchen

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2022
    Gretchen, you are a sweetheart! Thank you so much! I appreciate it so much! I am so sorry my YouTube video was down. There was an error that we couldn't fix. However it sounds like you knew the song pretty well. Are you another Billy Joel fan? I've been to 5 concerts and he doesn't seem to slow down. I was surprised that this just got to the voting booth this afternoon and it is only open for today. Don't they usually stay open for a couple days? Maybe they are all different. Anyway, I truly appreciate your kind comments, and those lovely six stars my sweet friend! Thank you so very much! You gave me a needed smile.
Comment from Aussie
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I liked the bouncy song from fat old Santa. He sure gets around for an old bloke. The real Santa was an old man in reindeer country. He hand carved animals for the children every Christmas, his name Kris Kringle.

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2022
    I hadn't heard about old Kris in a long time. Lol! Thanks K for your lovely review and kind comments my dear friend! So appreciated!
Comment from Moonbeams Musings 55
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Billy Joel would love this one. I sure did. Great use of his song. It is so catchy and humorous. Great flow and word choice of words. Great song for the season. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2022
    Thank you so much Moonbeams. I didn't even realize the booth was out on this one and looked and it's the only day. So I thank you for the good wishes on this one. And thank you for your very kind review and comments. They are so appreciated my friend!
reply by Moonbeams Musings 55 on 15-Dec-2022
    Sure thing!👍
Comment from prettybluebirds
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I just got through reading this song rewrite for the contest. I thought it was neat and well-delivered. The artwork is more than perfect for the writing. Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2022
    I thank you so much! You are always one of the sweetest people here and I appreciate your very kind comments, my dear friend!