Comment from evilynne

Excellent

You write beautiful words of faith. The pictures of the clouds are awesome and inspiring, an awesome reminder that Jesus will return to save us.Evi

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2022

Oh Thank you so very much Evi!,. You are so very sweet, and I can't thank you enough for your kind comments regarding my poem. I am so thankful for you and other Christian fellow friends and authors here.
Much appreciated my dear friend.

Comment from Goosey Gander

Excellent

This poem is so creative! You must be a very imaginative person! I think this poem shows some great faith, and I love it all. Brilliant. Each line flows swiftly into the next, and the meter is great. Thank you for sharing!
-GG

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2022

Oh Thank you so very much GG! You are so very sweet, and I can't thank you enough for your kind comments regarding my poem. I am so thankful for you and other Christian fellow friends and authors here.
Much appreciated my dear friend!

Comment from susand3022

Excellent

Hi Debi,
This was a lovely poem about beautiful clouds. I expect that at least some were the artwork of some computer program. However, they certainly are the perfect representation of the Man Upstairs.
Susan :)

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022

Oh Thank you so very much Susan! You are so very sweet, and I can't thank you enough for your kind comments regarding my poem.
Much appreciated my dear friend!

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This poem, Divine Clouds, pulls the best thoughts and hopes we have and projects them onto the sky with images that make our collective hearts beat faster.

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2022

Oh Thank you so very much Bill. . You are so very sweet, and I can't thank you enough for your kind comments regarding my poem.
Much appreciated my dear friend!

Comment from Write Right Writer

Excellent

Debi...

Well done! I love the "ratcheting up" of your writing in each stanza; from beautifully divine clouds, to eternity in heavenly realms, to access granted by God himself. Your poem creates a path of aspiration and inspiration.

Technically, it is fantastic. Strong theme. Clear direction. Sharp focus. Steady pace. Smooth flow. Rhythmic meter. Flawless aabb rhyming pattern.

Thanks for writing and sharing this with us.

Blessings...

Curt (WRW)

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022

Awe, thank you so very much Curt.. You are always so sweet and I appreciate your very lovely words. It is always so nice to hear from you and have you review my posts. So appreciated! It's just been so long since we talked. Lol! I was just about ready to turn off the lights and noticed a couple more reviews so thought I'd better answer so not so much for tomorrow.
Thank you again my dear friend.

Comment from MissMerri

Excellent

I didn't realize I was out of sixes until I tried to give one to this beautiful poem. So sorry, but I want you to know how much I enjoyed it anyway. It is meaningful and musical and beautiful in every way. Loved it!! MM

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022

I am overwhelmed by your kindness, Adonna. I appreciate your lovely comments so much. Just as I appreciate you. Thank you again my dear friend.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Debi, This is a very beautiful and very well written heartfelt poem you have penned about the picture from the club. You used great descriptive words and I believe He is coming back again like He said on a white horse. Thank you for sharing with us! love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022

Teri, you are so very sweet! When I saw your event notice and I saw that picture, I thought, it is time to write something for the club. So I said a little prayer and asked for guidance. Within an hour I had it posted, but I had no idea it was going to be on FS too. So after I got a couple kind reviews, I promoted it. I guess I was a little confused because I haven't been involved until now, but want to be. So I did a little editing and that was that. ...So.thank you for your lovely words and for your lovely you! You are so special!

Comment from jake cosmos aller

Excellent

Nice Christian theme poem which I can appreciate although I am not a Christian and don't share your faith. But the poem is well done and I like the cursive fonts.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022

Thanks so much Jake! Your kind reviews and comments show how respectful you are of those who believe differently then you. And that is a trait that I admire from any belief system. Thank you so much my dear friend!

Comment from Boogienights

Excellent

Those clouds would be a beautiful sight to see and a sure sign of the second coming. Your poem is well written and it really touched my heart. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022

Awe, thank you so very much Sharon!. You are always so sweet and I appreciate your very lovely words. It is always so nice to hear from you and have you review my posts. So appreciated!
Thank you again my dear friend.

Comment from Anne Johnston

Excellent

Thank you, Debi, for sharing this beautiful poem for the club event. When I see fluffy clouds in the sky, I often wonder if it could be the day Jesus returns. We will meet Him in the clouds and forever be with Him.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022

And what a wondrous day that will be. Imagine God wanting us to write beautiful poems and stories, singing His praises. It could happen. He gave us our gifts and perhaps will have us use them in Heaven. Just a thought. : )
Thanks Anne for your lovely review and words. I appreciate them and you so much my lovely friend!

reply by Anne Johnston on 05-Nov-2022

You are very welcome, Debi.