Santa's New Christmas Plan
Santa goes modern.37 total reviews
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Imaginative, creative, clever, and so much fun to read. Santa has now entered the modern delivery system.
This has to be a contender in the contest.
I found it so delightful to read.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes,
Mary
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2022
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Imaginative, creative, clever, and so much fun to read. Santa has now entered the modern delivery system.
This has to be a contender in the contest.
I found it so delightful to read.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment Written 11-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2022
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Mary, thank you for the six stars! This was a fun write for me. Thank you for reading, Terry.
Comment from Thomas Blanks
After some investigation, we have determined the connection is weak over Texas due to Senator Tedbenezer Crooze's "Humbug" vibes that neutralize the Christmas spirit and smell like the Grinch's armpits. It might be easier to send Tedbenezer a bogus invitation to the Trump Plaza in New York City for a non-existent Christmas party to get him out of the state that night. Just a suggestion.
Conspiratorially yours,
Thomas
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2022
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After some investigation, we have determined the connection is weak over Texas due to Senator Tedbenezer Crooze's "Humbug" vibes that neutralize the Christmas spirit and smell like the Grinch's armpits. It might be easier to send Tedbenezer a bogus invitation to the Trump Plaza in New York City for a non-existent Christmas party to get him out of the state that night. Just a suggestion.
Conspiratorially yours,
Thomas
Comment Written 11-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2022
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Thomas, I love the Ted suggestion! Thank you for reading, Terry.
Comment from Carol Clark2
This is a wonderfully imaginative story for Christmas. Sounds like this plan will really help Santa save some much-needed time on Christmas Eve, thanks to Jeff. Thanks for sharing. God bless us, every one!
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This is a wonderfully imaginative story for Christmas. Sounds like this plan will really help Santa save some much-needed time on Christmas Eve, thanks to Jeff. Thanks for sharing. God bless us, every one!
Comment Written 11-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2022
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Carol, thank you for the six stars! I am delighted you enjoyed the story. It was a fun write for me. Terry.
Comment from lyenochka
Enjoyed your imagination, Terry! And I think Terry Twinklestar should send a copy of this story to Mr. Bezos himself! I had to smile that the delay would occur over Texas and that the solution would involve Jeff Bezos's Blue Origin.
Jeff Bezo's spaceship, (Bezos's)
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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Enjoyed your imagination, Terry! And I think Terry Twinklestar should send a copy of this story to Mr. Bezos himself! I had to smile that the delay would occur over Texas and that the solution would involve Jeff Bezos's Blue Origin.
Jeff Bezo's spaceship, (Bezos's)
Comment Written 11-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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Helen, thank you for the six stars! I did send a copy to Jeff. Thank you for reading. It was a fun write.Terry
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Well, I must say, Terry, Santa has some very smart elves working
for him. I enjoyed your fun contest entry. It had great organization
and great imagery with smooth flow. The new plan was very detailed
and worked due to the prior planning. You moved Santa and his
travels, reindeer, and all into a new adventure. I could see this as
a continuing story.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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Well, I must say, Terry, Santa has some very smart elves working
for him. I enjoyed your fun contest entry. It had great organization
and great imagery with smooth flow. The new plan was very detailed
and worked due to the prior planning. You moved Santa and his
travels, reindeer, and all into a new adventure. I could see this as
a continuing story.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 11-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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Jan thank you for your fun review! It was also a fun write. Terry.
Comment from Annmuma
Am I limited to 1 six!!!!!!! That can't be. Maybe you could post it twice to manage at least a double play on this. Terry, if you don't present this to a children's book publisher, I am going to be disappointed. What a fabulous tale. So creative, so fun, so 'today' with lots of yesterday to make it work. There are tons of illustrators who could do the drawings for you. Do you know one? I do and I bet she would love doing it. I can't stop visualizing this in a book -- then maybe a Christmas movie. It is a treasure not to be kept for Fanstory only! You must share it. The Christmas feel was so complete, I could smell the hot cookies and taste the peppermint. I just love it, love it, love it. It is Christmas! ann
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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Am I limited to 1 six!!!!!!! That can't be. Maybe you could post it twice to manage at least a double play on this. Terry, if you don't present this to a children's book publisher, I am going to be disappointed. What a fabulous tale. So creative, so fun, so 'today' with lots of yesterday to make it work. There are tons of illustrators who could do the drawings for you. Do you know one? I do and I bet she would love doing it. I can't stop visualizing this in a book -- then maybe a Christmas movie. It is a treasure not to be kept for Fanstory only! You must share it. The Christmas feel was so complete, I could smell the hot cookies and taste the peppermint. I just love it, love it, love it. It is Christmas! ann
Comment Written 11-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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Ann, thank you for the six stars. We will talk further. Terry
Comment from Shirley McLain
Loved your Christmas story. I'm glad Santa had someone to help with the relay. This was very inventive and as I've told you every week, you do an excellent job. Enjoy your evening. Shirley
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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Loved your Christmas story. I'm glad Santa had someone to help with the relay. This was very inventive and as I've told you every week, you do an excellent job. Enjoy your evening. Shirley
Comment Written 11-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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Shirley, thank you for the six stars! This was a departure for me, but I admit I had a good time writing it. Thank you, Terry.
Comment from Anne Johnston
Wow, you have really let your imagination soar and come up with a different take on Christmas. Well written and should be a winner for this contest. You surely put a lot of thought and effort into this.
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Wow, you have really let your imagination soar and come up with a different take on Christmas. Well written and should be a winner for this contest. You surely put a lot of thought and effort into this.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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Anne, thank you for the six stars. I did have a lot fun writing this one, Thank you for reading. Terry.
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You are very welcome
Comment from Sally Law
Aw, Terry, a delightful story of modernization of the worldwide toy delivery. Santa and his elves have so much more than Jeff. Bezos is so slim and doesn't stick around for the milk and cookies. That's one of the many things I like about Santa Claus and the personal touch he offers. He has complicated my Snickerdoodles on more than one occasion.
Well, God bless you, Terry, and us all. Thank you for the wonderful year and enchanting story. Now I know where the twinkle comes from.
Merry Christmas, Terry!
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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Aw, Terry, a delightful story of modernization of the worldwide toy delivery. Santa and his elves have so much more than Jeff. Bezos is so slim and doesn't stick around for the milk and cookies. That's one of the many things I like about Santa Claus and the personal touch he offers. He has complicated my Snickerdoodles on more than one occasion.
Well, God bless you, Terry, and us all. Thank you for the wonderful year and enchanting story. Now I know where the twinkle comes from.
Merry Christmas, Terry!
Sal XOs
Comment Written 11-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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Sally, thank you for reading my story! Terry.
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You're so welcome!
Comment from pome lover
And the imagination runs wild! Cute, cute! and clever, too.
You ought to turn that into a children's book. It'd sell like hotcakes!
And wouldn't that be fun. Next, of course, would be the movie!
Do you draw?
Katharine
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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And the imagination runs wild! Cute, cute! and clever, too.
You ought to turn that into a children's book. It'd sell like hotcakes!
And wouldn't that be fun. Next, of course, would be the movie!
Do you draw?
Katharine
Comment Written 11-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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LOL, No don't draw. Thank you for reading, it was fun to write the story. Terry.