Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 87 "Hush, Hush"Musings of an old man - 2022
22 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hey Jim,
This poem reminds us to enjoy and be thankful for all the beautiful things in nature for they are all gifts.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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Hey Jim,
This poem reminds us to enjoy and be thankful for all the beautiful things in nature for they are all gifts.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written 26-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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Thanks Joan, I do appreciate the good wishes.
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No problem, JIm.
Joan
Comment from Wendy G
Oh very beautiful. I do like the idea of untethering from thoughts, and allowing that perfect peace from God to settle our soul, and find respite from life's cares, while enjoying and being grateful for God's gift of restoration through nature. Fine writing, very nice.
Wendy
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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Oh very beautiful. I do like the idea of untethering from thoughts, and allowing that perfect peace from God to settle our soul, and find respite from life's cares, while enjoying and being grateful for God's gift of restoration through nature. Fine writing, very nice.
Wendy
Comment Written 25-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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Thanks very much Wendy! 🙏🙏
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and well written poem you have penned for the Faith Poetry contest. You used great descriptive words that let us know that God is always near to us in the nature we see every day. You used very nice imagery from the picture you took. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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This is a very beautiful and well written poem you have penned for the Faith Poetry contest. You used great descriptive words that let us know that God is always near to us in the nature we see every day. You used very nice imagery from the picture you took. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 25-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from Bill Schott
This spiritual poem, Hush Hush, presented with four ABAB-rhymed quatrains, asks the readers to stop and take it all in. We are passing through just as the seasons. Good stuff.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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This spiritual poem, Hush Hush, presented with four ABAB-rhymed quatrains, asks the readers to stop and take it all in. We are passing through just as the seasons. Good stuff.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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Thanks Bill!
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No mistakes found in your poem. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No mistakes found in your poem. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 25-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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Thanks Raul! Be well!
Comment from jacquelyn popp
Absolutely beautiful poem. The descriptive words and imagery were perfectly done. The illustration was beautiful and went well with your poem. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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Absolutely beautiful poem. The descriptive words and imagery were perfectly done. The illustration was beautiful and went well with your poem. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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Jacquelyn, I am so very honored to get your six star validation. Thank you and Bless you. 🙏🙏🎶🎶
Comment from royowen
Oh yes indeed, God gives us lots of things for tending and to keep us nourished and even occupied. As old as we may be. This is delightfully put together Jim, excellent rhyming and beautiful language, an excellent post. Well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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Oh yes indeed, God gives us lots of things for tending and to keep us nourished and even occupied. As old as we may be. This is delightfully put together Jim, excellent rhyming and beautiful language, an excellent post. Well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 25-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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Thank you very-much,Roy! We are richly blest by all things that bring God?s presence into full perspective.
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Absolutely
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice photo.
-You wrote a good poem to go with it.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-A very good opening verse that welcomes the reader.
-I also like the verse about the birds and "Their praises to God."
-A very good concluding verse and final phrase about the trees.
-Well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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-Very nice photo.
-You wrote a good poem to go with it.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-A very good opening verse that welcomes the reader.
-I also like the verse about the birds and "Their praises to God."
-A very good concluding verse and final phrase about the trees.
-Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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Pam, I delight in your validation of this poem, thank you! 🙏🙏🎶🎶🎶
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You are very welcome, Jim🍁🦋🦅��🎼
Comment from lyenochka
This was brilliant. I loved "untethering from thoughts" and the final quatrain:
"As the seasons give birth to change
make space in times such as these
to pass over the finite things and exchange
wants into needs ... and thank God for trees."
This shows a spiritual wisdom of trusting God and learning from spending time with trees. Hope this does well in the contest!
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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This was brilliant. I loved "untethering from thoughts" and the final quatrain:
"As the seasons give birth to change
make space in times such as these
to pass over the finite things and exchange
wants into needs ... and thank God for trees."
This shows a spiritual wisdom of trusting God and learning from spending time with trees. Hope this does well in the contest!
Comment Written 25-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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Thank you! Bless you! I truly appreciate your kind comments.🙏🙏🙏🎶🎶
Comment from GWHARGIS
I do love trees. Each one is a work of art. They bend, grow towards the heavens. I love to look at the different barks. God has truly given us a beautiful thing. Gorgeous and evocative. Thos wad a beautiful poem. Gretchen
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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I do love trees. Each one is a work of art. They bend, grow towards the heavens. I love to look at the different barks. God has truly given us a beautiful thing. Gorgeous and evocative. Thos wad a beautiful poem. Gretchen
Comment Written 25-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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Thank you sister of the forest! 🙏🙏🎶🎶