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Comment from Sankey
Another informative chapter, as was the previous one.I was not notified of that but glad I found it. You do need to notify me when you post. Tom's notification system lets me down too often. No spags in either chapter.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Another informative chapter, as was the previous one.I was not notified of that but glad I found it. You do need to notify me when you post. Tom's notification system lets me down too often. No spags in either chapter.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Will try to remember to notify you. Hope all is well in your world? Appreciate the review.
Comment from Douglas Goff
This is a great work. The references to all the old country superstars are awesome.
I had to look up The Sword of Damocles to get the reference. Well played Sir!
I enjoyed this and found no grammatical issues.
Nice job!
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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This is a great work. The references to all the old country superstars are awesome.
I had to look up The Sword of Damocles to get the reference. Well played Sir!
I enjoyed this and found no grammatical issues.
Nice job!
Comment Written 12-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from royowen
I'm wondering if our hero will be caught out or not, but I suspect with the combination of "street smarts" and applied desperation it's probably an even money bet, but even if he's apprehended, somehow I don't think he'll be held fo long, well done, Brett, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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I'm wondering if our hero will be caught out or not, but I suspect with the combination of "street smarts" and applied desperation it's probably an even money bet, but even if he's apprehended, somehow I don't think he'll be held fo long, well done, Brett, blessings Roy
Comment Written 12-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from BethShelby
You stop the narative right at the spot where outrunning to wind should apply. I don't know how you're getting out of this one, but I hope you don't get sent back. I'm anxiously awaiting your next move.
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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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You stop the narative right at the spot where outrunning to wind should apply. I don't know how you're getting out of this one, but I hope you don't get sent back. I'm anxiously awaiting your next move.
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Comment Written 12-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Appetite the rview. Glad you enjoyed this chapter.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I had not heard the song, 'Trying to Outrun the Wind'. I YouTubed it by Willie and Waylon. I had heard it but forgot it. I'm glad I took time to listen. Thank you.
Frank Zane - How did I miss hearing of him??
Thank you for sharing this addition to your story with us. Since you had no desire to go back to Hermitage Hall, I can't wait to see what happens next.
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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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I had not heard the song, 'Trying to Outrun the Wind'. I YouTubed it by Willie and Waylon. I had heard it but forgot it. I'm glad I took time to listen. Thank you.
Frank Zane - How did I miss hearing of him??
Thank you for sharing this addition to your story with us. Since you had no desire to go back to Hermitage Hall, I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Comment Written 12-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter. Appreciate the review.
