Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-It is a spectacular owl and very nice presentation.
-The font choice works well, too.
-You wrote a very good poem with effective imagery and rhyme.
-You also tell a good story.
-I like these images, "Enchanted rainbow in a tree" and
"Wingspan explosion."
-A good concluding verse, too.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2022

Thank you very much for such kind comments Pam. I appreciate more than you could possibly know. It was a fun poem to write, with Sally's Circus poem theme. However I rhyme a little more than her, so maybe should call this a
Merry~go~Rhyme poem. Lol.

reply by Pam (respa) on 07-Oct-2022

You are very welcome and I appreciate your reply. I like the the Merry-go-Rhyme poem. Why don't you write one of those, too. Where did you get the owl artwork?

reply by the author on 07-Oct-2022

I googled bright and colorful owl. Thank you again Pam for your lovely comments.

reply by Pam (respa) on 08-Oct-2022

Thanks for sharing. You are very welcome, again!

Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

Don't you find so many within the sphere of FanStory are 'one of a kind' only in differing genres? Well done. This should do well in This One's Faux You ....................................................................................

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2022

Thanks so very much Tom for such kind comments regarding my poem. As always, you are a gem of a friend. Thanks again my friend.

Comment from karenina

Excellent

Beautiful owl! Let's start with that!

I'm afraid I do not not know Sally's specific style to comment on if this poem comes close to mimicking her presentations...

Nonetheless if I were Sally I'd be thrilled to be represented in this contest!

Karenina

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2022

Thanks Karenina, Sally invented a new kind of poetry, ..Circus poems. One of her most recent ones may still be promoted. I think on the subject of loving high heels! Thanks for your kind comment on about the picture choice.

reply by karenina on 07-Oct-2022

Oh! The high heel poem! Did not realize that was her invented poem form!

Cool beans!

reply by the author on 07-Oct-2022

I'm more of a Rhymer, but had lots of fun with this. Perhaps we'll call it a
Merry~go~Rhyme.

Comment from Carol Hillebrenner

Excellent

You snagged a really beautiful owl to illustrate your story. I enjoyed your poem also. I'm a little surprised you had Sally see him as she is blind, but maybe he somehow made her see as well since he decided he liked us humans a lot.

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2022

Awe, thank you Carol! I actually picked this colorful owl to use to dedicate to Sally and write about , because she has equipment that helps her to visualize very bright objects so she can see what it would look like, even if part of it's in her head. Thanks for very fun review TV

Comment from Jasmine Girl

Excellent

Wow. I like this owl, so colorful. I can't imagine what's like when he opens his wings, two huge multi-colored wings flapping and flapping, accompanied by "hoot, hoot".

Well done and good luck.

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022

Thank you so very much Jasmine, for such kind words for my dedication to Sally's Circus Poems. I am truly delightful that you liked it. Thank you again my dear friend!

Comment from Raul1

Excellent

You have described a fellow Fanstorian here in this site. It's beautifully written. It is clear and concise. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022

Thanks Raul, for such kind words for this dedication poem to Sally Law's circus poems. I am delighted that you enjoyed it. Thank you so much my dear friend

reply by Raul1 on 06-Oct-2022

You're welcome!

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

This is a new form for me. Could you give me the rules.
This bird is amazing, but you would get tired of seeing him day in day out.
I would think he would leave if he could find no food. The city might be a better place for him. Or inside a barn.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022

Thanks Joan, for such kind words for this dedication poem to Sally Law's circus poems. I am delighted that you enjoyed it. Thank you so much my dear friend

reply by dragonpoet on 07-Oct-2022

You're most kindly welcome, friend.
Joan

Comment from Kaiku

Excellent

Very nice. I have a house that is home to 4 owls, all ceramic, glass and wood. I believe the owl represents happiness. Great vibrant picture you offered. Personally, I am not a huge fan of ornate cursive in multiple stanza work. My poor eyes just have to work too hard. But that is my problem. For you, it showed elegance and beauty.

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022

Thanks Kaiku, and for such positively very kind words for this dedication poem to Sally Law's circus poems. I am delighted that you enjoyed it. Thank you so much my dear friend

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Very nice use of words and combined phrases. You create a lovely picture that creates a visual experience that readers can connect to, It is one thing to tell readers something, but quite another to show them, to excite their imaginations which in turns causes them to see the picture you are painting.

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022

Thanks Nomi, for your very kind words for for my take on Sally's Circus poems. You kindness always means the world to me. Thank you once again my dear friend!

Comment from harmony13

Excellent

The author's words are engaging, lovely, colorful, and creative. I found
these words filled with a deeper meaning which I found in the last stanza.
What a wonderful dedication to Sally Law! The poem flows and connects
well. The artwork is beautiful and compliments this poem well.

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022

Thanks Maria, for such kind words for this dedication poem to Sally Law's circus poems. I am delighted that you enjoyed it. Thank you so much my dear friend,