Tanka Collection
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Comment from Pam (respa)
-Great artwork and nice presentation, Gypsy.
-You do a good job with the form:
effective nature imagery and onomatopoeia.
-You set the scene in the opening lines.
-A good pivot line.
-Vivid imagery showing the result of
"the soaked droopy leaves."
-I enjoyed your poem.
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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
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-Great artwork and nice presentation, Gypsy.
-You do a good job with the form:
effective nature imagery and onomatopoeia.
-You set the scene in the opening lines.
-A good pivot line.
-Vivid imagery showing the result of
"the soaked droopy leaves."
-I enjoyed your poem.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
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Pam,
Thank you very much, my friend. I appreciate your time and kind review.
Gypsy
"Hope rises like a phoenix from the ashes of shattered dreams." --S.A. Sachs
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You are very welcome, Gypsy!