One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
I liked everything about this poem, from the excellent presentation (great colours for autumn), to the line-end rhyme. Describing the breeze as flirty was very evokative. Kate xx
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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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I liked everything about this poem, from the excellent presentation (great colours for autumn), to the line-end rhyme. Describing the breeze as flirty was very evokative. Kate xx
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Comment Written 30-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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Kate
Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback. Hugs!
Gypsy