One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from aryr
I loved both pictures, Gypsy. And I do so love to star gaze, I am so glad you wrote your poem about Mount Teide, it was amazing to read your narrative notes. Blessed Be n Hugs!
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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I loved both pictures, Gypsy. And I do so love to star gaze, I am so glad you wrote your poem about Mount Teide, it was amazing to read your narrative notes. Blessed Be n Hugs!
Comment Written 23-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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Aryr,
Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback. Blessed be and hugs
Gypsy Queen
"A friend is one who overlooks your broken fence and admires the flowers in your garden." -author unknown
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Most welcome, Gypsy. Blessed Be n Hugs!.
Comment from lyenochka
Another gorgeous presentation! I didn't know that part of the Canaries was the "darkest place on Earth." I wonder if Dolly has been stargazing there. I especially loved "bombarded by brilliant beauties." Love seeing meteors!
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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Another gorgeous presentation! I didn't know that part of the Canaries was the "darkest place on Earth." I wonder if Dolly has been stargazing there. I especially loved "bombarded by brilliant beauties." Love seeing meteors!
Comment Written 23-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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Helen,
Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback. Love you ❤️
Marival
"A friend is one who overlooks your broken fence and admires the flowers in your garden." -author unknown
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Gypsy,
This is a wonderful presentation about our night sky.
Your words ring true, and your photo presentation is excellent.
This is a great modern haiku. I would love to travel to the Canary Islands to see a bright night sky.
I hope you're doing well. I'm trying to write a story and am fumbling a bit.
Good luck with all you do, Gypsy.
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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Gypsy,
This is a wonderful presentation about our night sky.
Your words ring true, and your photo presentation is excellent.
This is a great modern haiku. I would love to travel to the Canary Islands to see a bright night sky.
I hope you're doing well. I'm trying to write a story and am fumbling a bit.
Good luck with all you do, Gypsy.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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Cindy
Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy Queen
"A friend is one who overlooks your broken fence and admires the flowers in your garden." -author unknown
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You?re welcome, Gypsy.
And thank you for the nice quote.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment from lancellot
This is a very nice Haiku, and it a different form than we normally see on FanStory. I also like the subject. Most of the time, we don't see writings about nature outside the planet.
Well done.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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This is a very nice Haiku, and it a different form than we normally see on FanStory. I also like the subject. Most of the time, we don't see writings about nature outside the planet.
Well done.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy Queen
"A friend is one who overlooks your broken fence and admires the flowers in your garden." -author unknown
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
What a special place this is, and I thank you for sharing it with us.
The majesty is captured through your careful chosen and crafted words.
To me, this is a moment in time, when the heavens, the stars, and your soul unite.
The three dimensional visual expands the experience.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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What a special place this is, and I thank you for sharing it with us.
The majesty is captured through your careful chosen and crafted words.
To me, this is a moment in time, when the heavens, the stars, and your soul unite.
The three dimensional visual expands the experience.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy Queen
"A friend is one who overlooks your broken fence and admires the flowers in your garden." -author unknown
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Written with pleasure.
Reading this quote has made my day!!!
Have a great weekend;)
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy....and when you think about the vast distances involved, you can drive yourself crazy and I'm close enough, I try not to think about it!
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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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Another fine poem, Gypsy....and when you think about the vast distances involved, you can drive yourself crazy and I'm close enough, I try not to think about it!
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Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy Queen
"A friend is one who overlooks your broken fence and admires the flowers in your garden." -author unknown
Comment from Mrs. KT
Lovely, Gypsy!
Beautiful imagery!
I would also be "awestruck" by such a presentation...
Wondering if brevity is one of the goals, if you could delete "brilliant beauties" and go with "brilliance." Just a thought! Definitely brilliant imagery.
Thank you for sharing!
diane
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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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Lovely, Gypsy!
Beautiful imagery!
I would also be "awestruck" by such a presentation...
Wondering if brevity is one of the goals, if you could delete "brilliant beauties" and go with "brilliance." Just a thought! Definitely brilliant imagery.
Thank you for sharing!
diane
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Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy Queen
"A friend is one who overlooks your broken fence and admires the flowers in your garden." -author unknown