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Comment from Ric Myworld
As an old boy who left his grandparents' home at fifteen and traipsed 2,300 miles to California, it didn't take me long to figure out how a lonesome, broke, unwanted dog felt like. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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As an old boy who left his grandparents' home at fifteen and traipsed 2,300 miles to California, it didn't take me long to figure out how a lonesome, broke, unwanted dog felt like. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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More tidbit about you. Appreciate the review.
Comment from Shirley McLain
I think we all have done something stupid in our past. I just can't think of mine at the moment. :) You did a great job with this chapter, and I'm ready to read the next. Have a great day. Shirley
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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I think we all have done something stupid in our past. I just can't think of mine at the moment. :) You did a great job with this chapter, and I'm ready to read the next. Have a great day. Shirley
Comment Written 19-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter. Appreciate the review.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
I can understand the theft of the Pepsi, it was an act out of desperation, but not the deliberate act of flushing the can down the toilet and ruining the Clerk's day. He had no reason to do that. In answer to his question... He will be going to the Reform School if he doesn't clean up his act. I understand he is an angry young man, but he needs to be more selective when he picks a battlefield. LOL Nancy:)
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2022
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I can understand the theft of the Pepsi, it was an act out of desperation, but not the deliberate act of flushing the can down the toilet and ruining the Clerk's day. He had no reason to do that. In answer to his question... He will be going to the Reform School if he doesn't clean up his act. I understand he is an angry young man, but he needs to be more selective when he picks a battlefield. LOL Nancy:)
Comment Written 19-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2022
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I did a lot of things back then I probably should not have done. Eventually, Dusty West straighten that road out, but that is getting way ahead of where my autobiography is at right now. Appreciate the review.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this addition to your story with us. I am enjoying reading this. As I think I am curious if the child thought like this or are these your thoughts looking back?
I sat down on top of the toilet seat and relaxed. (you can omit 'down' it's not needed.)
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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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Thank you for sharing this addition to your story with us. I am enjoying reading this. As I think I am curious if the child thought like this or are these your thoughts looking back?
I sat down on top of the toilet seat and relaxed. (you can omit 'down' it's not needed.)
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Comment Written 19-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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Appreciate your review. Trying to write this as a youngster's thoughts combined with an old man recollecting.
Comment from BethShelby
I'm enjoying this story and If it was a book. I'll likely not stop reading until I finished it. I guess biographical non-fiction is my favorite form of writing so I look forward to the next chapter.
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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2022
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I'm enjoying this story and If it was a book. I'll likely not stop reading until I finished it. I guess biographical non-fiction is my favorite form of writing so I look forward to the next chapter.
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Comment Written 19-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2022
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter. Appreciate the review.
