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Comment from Regina Elliott
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

So sadly beauteous and
timeless. You made a broken
romance into an artistic
tapestry of sorrow. Contests
aren't everything, but I feel
this jewel would be a strong
entry. Blessings to you.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2022
    Thank you very much, Regina. I usually don't enter contests, unless they are free.

    I appreciate your exceptional review and six stars! You are very kind. Have a wonderful day.

    Gypsy
    "Every sunset brings the promise of a new dawn." - Ralph Waldo Emerson
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Reading this sent shivers down my spine, and the hair on my head started to rise. It was an astonishing feeling.
My favourite words:
withered fields

covered by useless regrets
To me this is a phenomenal way to describe the desolation felt at the end of a love affair. Thank you for sharing this tremendous poem. Kate xx

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2022
    Thank you very much, Kate. I appreciate your exceptional review and six stars! You are very kind. Have a wonderful day.

    Gypsy
    "Every sunset brings the promise of a new dawn." - Ralph Waldo Emerson
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Excellent
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We never stop pursuing love and even when we have our heart broken we still want more as being in love tends to make life worth living, a magical write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 14-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2022
    I appreciate your exceptional review. You are very kind. Have a wonderful day.

    Gypsy
    "Every sunset brings the promise of a new dawn." - Ralph Waldo Emerson
Comment from Raul1
Excellent
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I have enjoyed reading your wonderful and beautiful poem. It is interesting and entertaining to read. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Nice work! Thank you for sharing this poem!

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 Comment Written 13-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2022
    Thank you, Raul.

    Gypsy (*=*)
reply by Raul1 on 14-Sep-2022
    You're welcome!