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Comment from Raul1
This story meets the requirements for the contest. It is interesting and entertaining to read. I like your flash fiction. Excellent work! No mistakes. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2022
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This story meets the requirements for the contest. It is interesting and entertaining to read. I like your flash fiction. Excellent work! No mistakes. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 30-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2022
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Raul,
Thanks for taking the time to read my flash fiction entry. Let us see how it goes. You keep well. Keep writing and have a good day.
Regards
Barry Penfold
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Well, Mom turned off the tv at the most important part, Barry.
You did a great job 'calling' the race. Maybe there as a replay
later. Your words were well thought out for the short length
required.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2022
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Well, Mom turned off the tv at the most important part, Barry.
You did a great job 'calling' the race. Maybe there as a replay
later. Your words were well thought out for the short length
required.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 30-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2022
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Jan,
Once again thanks for taking the time to read and review my flash fiction contest entry. Glad you enjoyed it. It has evoked a number of different responses as to the ending. Very interesting. You have a great day and also congratulatons on your recent win. Take Care.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment from Sally Law
Stupendous offering for this super short prose. My goodness, the runaway winner in my eyes!! I'm so sorry to be out of sixes. A high five with compliments. If this doesn't win, I will eat my hat.
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal :))
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2022
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Stupendous offering for this super short prose. My goodness, the runaway winner in my eyes!! I'm so sorry to be out of sixes. A high five with compliments. If this doesn't win, I will eat my hat.
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal :))
Comment Written 30-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2022
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Sal,
Thanks for your comments. Glad you enjoyed it and I hope you will not be eating your hat. You had better pick out a tasty one just in case.
Take Care and have a lovely day.
Regards
Barry .
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Shoe-in win! Blessings and best wishes,
Sal :))
Comment from Marietta Geckos
I loved this! The writing masterfully transports the reader right into the race. You had us feeling like we were running right along with a horse and the rider, The phrasing was exceptional. I enjoyed it immensely. immensely
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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2022
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I loved this! The writing masterfully transports the reader right into the race. You had us feeling like we were running right along with a horse and the rider, The phrasing was exceptional. I enjoyed it immensely. immensely
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Comment Written 30-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2022
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Thanks for reading and reviewing my flash fiction contest entry.Glad you enjoyed it ;Nothing like a good horse race.
Take Care
Barry Penfold.
Comment from kahpot
Excellent, I am not sure whether I am confused or know what I am reading, which is Mum is navigating her children through foot traffic to pick someone up. none the less I very much enjoyed this read and journey, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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Excellent, I am not sure whether I am confused or know what I am reading, which is Mum is navigating her children through foot traffic to pick someone up. none the less I very much enjoyed this read and journey, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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Comment Written 30-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2022
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Thanks for taking the time to red and review my flash fiction entry. I just love your interpretation of it . I actually wrote is as a horse race. Dad viewing a replay ( Perhaps he was a jockey )Mum turning it off. But you have actually given it another dimension. Thanks
Have a good day.
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You know when short stories are well written when readers are intrigued and wander down many options, very well done****kahpot
