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Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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What a tragic event. How lucky that the loss of human life was so slight (in relation). I very much enjoyed your poem rich in imagery. And thanks for the explanation of what made it modern. Kate xx

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
    Thank you, Kate. It's always good to hear from you. I appreciate your kind review and helpful feedback. Have a wonderful weekend.

    Gypsy
    "The poet waits to paint the unsaid." ?Atticus
reply by Katherine M. (k-11) on 12-Aug-2022
    I don't answer more often, as I follow above all the "two-way road" rule for reviewing. But I always read. Kate xx
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
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That is one powerful earthquake. I would have been eleven, and do not remember hearing or reading about the quake. However, that was huge. Thank you for the awareness. The picture goes perfectly with the story. Than you for sharing.

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
    Thank you, Carolyn. It's always good to hear from you. I appreciate your kind review and helpful feedback. Have a wonderful weekend.

    Gypsy
    "The poet waits to paint the unsaid." ?Atticus
reply by Carolyn Dooley on 12-Aug-2022
    Thank you for your kind words. You are welcome.
Comment from prettybluebirds
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I can remember hearing about that earthquake on the news. It was a terrible and destructive quake, if I recall. Your poem is written in your usual lovely style. The artwork is perfect for the subject of the writing. Nicely done.

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 Comment Written 12-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
    Thank you. It's always good to hear from you. I appreciate your kind review and helpful feedback. Have a wonderful weekend.

    Gypsy
    "The poet waits to paint the unsaid." ?Atticus
Comment from lyenochka
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Yes, that earthquake was really shocking! Mare (AlaskaStory) wrote about this event in her book for kids. It is still talked about today by Alaskans. Great poem to remember this event.

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 Comment Written 12-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
    For kids? I think it would be a scary subject ... in my opinion.

    Thank you, Helen. It's always good to hear from you. I appreciate your kind review and helpful feedback. Have a wonderful weekend. I added Atticus picture in facebook and tagged you. He looks so cute.
    MariVal (*+*)
    "The poet waits to paint the unsaid." ?Atticus
reply by lyenochka on 12-Aug-2022
    Oh, it was well done. The Spirit Basket gives each big event in Alaskan history as lived through and experienced by a child.