A Hoop and a Hula
Loop Poetry38 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
Tina, This is a very cute and very well written loop poem you have penned for the contest. I love the very descriptive words and very cute imagery you chose. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2022
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Tina, This is a very cute and very well written loop poem you have penned for the contest. I love the very descriptive words and very cute imagery you chose. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 03-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2022
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Thank you, Teri!!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Bravo Zulu, naval speech for a job well done on your loop poetry. That said
the better way for a reader to read them is to omit the repeated word. I did with your and it made perfect sense. Therefore, If I was to write a loopy poem I'd write as normal and then add the last word to the following sentence.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2022
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Bravo Zulu, naval speech for a job well done on your loop poetry. That said
the better way for a reader to read them is to omit the repeated word. I did with your and it made perfect sense. Therefore, If I was to write a loopy poem I'd write as normal and then add the last word to the following sentence.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2022
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Thanks for the tip for loop poems. I will go read it that way. I appreciate this shiny review!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Cute artwork and nice presentation, Tina.
-You wrote a good loop poem for it,
and the hula hoop was a perfect topic for a loop!
-A good job with those, the rhyme, and imagery.
-I can relate to "chocolate-y ways and means!"
-The concluding verse makes a clever ending
for this "loop-the-loop" poem!
-I liked the good natured fun in this one.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2022
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-Cute artwork and nice presentation, Tina.
-You wrote a good loop poem for it,
and the hula hoop was a perfect topic for a loop!
-A good job with those, the rhyme, and imagery.
-I can relate to "chocolate-y ways and means!"
-The concluding verse makes a clever ending
for this "loop-the-loop" poem!
-I liked the good natured fun in this one.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2022
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Thanks so very much!
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You are very welcome!
Comment from Fleedleflump
I like that, as well as having some fun and dishing out the smiles, you've also told a story within the restrictive loop format, and all without it feeling too laboured. I very much enjoyed.
Mike
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2022
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I like that, as well as having some fun and dishing out the smiles, you've also told a story within the restrictive loop format, and all without it feeling too laboured. I very much enjoyed.
Mike
Comment Written 03-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2022
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It was more labored than it looks, lol. Thanks so much for your words!
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
This is a cute one. I like the picture. The hula hoop fits him. This was a great exercise. And it was fun. Back in the sixties, just about everyone had them. Those days, people found simple pleasures. Many people share these fun memories. Thank you.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2022
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This is a cute one. I like the picture. The hula hoop fits him. This was a great exercise. And it was fun. Back in the sixties, just about everyone had them. Those days, people found simple pleasures. Many people share these fun memories. Thank you.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2022
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Thank you so much for this review and your thoughts!
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You are welcome.
Comment from jake cosmos aller
I like this humorous take on the Loop contest theme. I will make my entry today or tomorrow. Need to check the deadline but I am afraid I am up for stiff competition.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022
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I like this humorous take on the Loop contest theme. I will make my entry today or tomorrow. Need to check the deadline but I am afraid I am up for stiff competition.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022
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Thank you and good luck!!
Tina
Comment from Terry Broxson
LOL, my, what a great little poem you have written for the loop contest, good luck. You have added a double loop to the loop! The creativity and humor are wonderful. Excellent work. Terry.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022
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LOL, my, what a great little poem you have written for the loop contest, good luck. You have added a double loop to the loop! The creativity and humor are wonderful. Excellent work. Terry.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022
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Thank you for your review!
Tina
Comment from royowen
This is beautifully written Tina, you know I've never succeeded in writing a decent loop poem, so I've sidelined until I pluck up the courage to write one, no such problem with this one, well done my great writing, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022
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This is beautifully written Tina, you know I've never succeeded in writing a decent loop poem, so I've sidelined until I pluck up the courage to write one, no such problem with this one, well done my great writing, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 02-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022
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Thank you, kind sir:) I thought, before writing this...if I can't have fun writing and laughing at myself, then I am wasting an opportunity. I appreciate the kind words and thoughts!
Tina
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You?re very wise, even if your name is Jo?er, Tina,
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Hahaha!
Comment from dragonpoet
Tina,
I never thought of hula-hooping (that is a verb) as a way to loose weight. But it is good that it worked for you.
Nicely done loop poem. Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022
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Tina,
I never thought of hula-hooping (that is a verb) as a way to loose weight. But it is good that it worked for you.
Nicely done loop poem. Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written 02-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022
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Thank you, Joan. I am trying! You stay healthy, too. Never know what virus will pop up next. Grr...
Tina
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No problem, Tina. We Ned to get free of all these diseases and their mutations.
Joan
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From your lips to God's ears...yes!
Comment from karenina
Say WHAT now?
Laughing with glee here!
You looped and hooped and made it all such fun I went back in for another reading and smiled!
I have a Hula-Hoop learning disability I think... I can't dance either.
Sadly, no trouble chomping on chocolate!
Too cute and just what the doctor ordered today!
Thanks for the sunshine!
Karenina
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022
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Say WHAT now?
Laughing with glee here!
You looped and hooped and made it all such fun I went back in for another reading and smiled!
I have a Hula-Hoop learning disability I think... I can't dance either.
Sadly, no trouble chomping on chocolate!
Too cute and just what the doctor ordered today!
Thanks for the sunshine!
Karenina
Comment Written 02-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022
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Aw, I am so glad you liked it. Your review is like sunshine! With all the serious happenings in the world right now, I figured we needed some humor.
Thanks!
Tina
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I second that! No more CNN! More poetry like yours!
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Haha...I will do my best to find more humor!
I appreciate you!