Fear
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Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
This is a unique presentation but one that mirrors the sentiment left very well.
The image is striking and pulled me in to your verse, held me, then released at the end.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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This is a unique presentation but one that mirrors the sentiment left very well.
The image is striking and pulled me in to your verse, held me, then released at the end.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Thank you for reading. I am glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-You selected good artwork for the topic, Nancy.
-You did a good job with the poem, too.
-Good syllable count and effective imagery
describing the darkness.
-A very good concluding line.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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-You selected good artwork for the topic, Nancy.
-You did a good job with the poem, too.
-Good syllable count and effective imagery
describing the darkness.
-A very good concluding line.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Thank you. I took the picture myself. The imagery was heartfelt.
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You are welcome and thanks for sharing about your photo. You should be it in your author notes.
Comment from Wendy G
I like your words for the Fear Senryu - but it was very hard to read, although I understand that you wanted the presentation to complement your words. perhaps a large font, and maybe bold would work.
Wendy
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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I like your words for the Fear Senryu - but it was very hard to read, although I understand that you wanted the presentation to complement your words. perhaps a large font, and maybe bold would work.
Wendy
Comment Written 23-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Thanks. I think you are right about the font. I am still kind of feeling my way into proper posting.
Comment from karenina
Wow. Your presentation is so dark it sends a chill up my spine. I almost wish your font size was a bit larger...
With little color contrast it would be easier to read, beneath that very effective but large image!
As for content? Stunning words!
Karenina
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Wow. Your presentation is so dark it sends a chill up my spine. I almost wish your font size was a bit larger...
With little color contrast it would be easier to read, beneath that very effective but large image!
As for content? Stunning words!
Karenina
Comment Written 23-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Thank you for you comments. I am glad the imagery came across. I agree about the font size. I am still figuring out how to make enlarging the font stick.
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Ah! Been there... Fought with that!!!
(If there's a trick, I haven't figured it out!)
;)
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
Cuz, I like it. You made me pull the Webster out on the first word. Great usages. I like the entire eerie, moody tone. The visual is on point. However, your powerful text appears small with such a large visual. Make the letters larger and bold. They will appear more prominent and mirror the thickness of darkness stated and shown in the visual.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Cuz, I like it. You made me pull the Webster out on the first word. Great usages. I like the entire eerie, moody tone. The visual is on point. However, your powerful text appears small with such a large visual. Make the letters larger and bold. They will appear more prominent and mirror the thickness of darkness stated and shown in the visual.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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I agree.I will keep working on the balance. Glad you liked the poem.
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It was a good poem.
Comment from amahra
I love the artwork you chose for your poem. It really matches the writing, especially with the faint moonlight in the sky. The poem was a bit eerie without being spooky. Great job!
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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I love the artwork you chose for your poem. It really matches the writing, especially with the faint moonlight in the sky. The poem was a bit eerie without being spooky. Great job!
Comment Written 22-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Thank you. The photo is my own so thank you twice.
Comment from Tina Crute
How simple of a presentation but the imagery is amazing. It makes me feel alone in the dark, with the wafting darkness all around. Well done, Nancy:)
Tina
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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How simple of a presentation but the imagery is amazing. It makes me feel alone in the dark, with the wafting darkness all around. Well done, Nancy:)
Tina
Comment Written 22-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Thank you. I am glad the feeling came across.
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Definitely! You're welcome!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a scary write as we often fear the darkness as we cannot see what lurks there, a chilling few words for the club Nancy, bring on the light so that hope returns, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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This is a scary write as we often fear the darkness as we cannot see what lurks there, a chilling few words for the club Nancy, bring on the light so that hope returns, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Thank you for you comments. I am glad the atmosphere came across. Next time maybe I'll go for light.
Comment from royowen
Of course "incorporeal" sets up the whole ethereal setting, it means that the whole experience of being touched by God gives this that great touch in your short, well done Nance, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Of course "incorporeal" sets up the whole ethereal setting, it means that the whole experience of being touched by God gives this that great touch in your short, well done Nance, blessings Roy
Comment Written 22-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Thank you. I am glad the atmosphere came through.
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Well done
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are thought provoking. The first two lines flow and
connect well. I really related to the second line when I am afraid. The last line made me really stop and think! The artwork couldn't be more perfect
for this poem. I found this poem extremely creative!
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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The author's words are thought provoking. The first two lines flow and
connect well. I really related to the second line when I am afraid. The last line made me really stop and think! The artwork couldn't be more perfect
for this poem. I found this poem extremely creative!
Comment Written 22-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Thank you for your kind words. The photo is mine as well, so thank you twice.
