Three Sisters
*Trigger Warning: Child abuse20 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Three Sisters
by Leann DS
A very sad story that unfortunately happens all the time. Scars of abuse will follow the children the rest of their lives.
The rhyme don't seem forced.
Well done.
Gypsy hugs
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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Three Sisters
by Leann DS
A very sad story that unfortunately happens all the time. Scars of abuse will follow the children the rest of their lives.
The rhyme don't seem forced.
Well done.
Gypsy hugs
Comment Written 15-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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Yes, it has been following them all, as they are now in their late 40s. They are my cousins, and I love them all dearly.
Thank you so much for stopping by to read, and thank you for your comments and review. Hugs.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is an exceptional poem in all respects: heart--wrenchingly and vividly descriptive, so realistic in its tone and connecting of the horrendous details of these girls' lives--and how they were affected by the abuse long
after they left that hellhole!
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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This is an exceptional poem in all respects: heart--wrenchingly and vividly descriptive, so realistic in its tone and connecting of the horrendous details of these girls' lives--and how they were affected by the abuse long
after they left that hellhole!
Comment Written 15-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much. I can remember being in late elementary school, and it was the middle of the night. The three girls ran to our house in bare feet with nothing on but underwear, scared to death because their dad was on a rampage. He is not a good man, but I'm grateful that my cousins are doing OK now. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Comment from karenina
So important to pull the bandage away and expose the festering sore of child abuse!
The cycle of abuse often tolls unbroken from generation to generation--even those who avoid repeating the behavior carry the PTSD of unspeakable treatment well into adulthood!
I volunteer at Battered Women's shelters and worked as a Guardian Ad Litem, advocating for just such children through the court system.
There must be a special place in hell for those who crush the budding flowers!
Thanks for speaking for your cousins, for all the silent victims!
Karenina
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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So important to pull the bandage away and expose the festering sore of child abuse!
The cycle of abuse often tolls unbroken from generation to generation--even those who avoid repeating the behavior carry the PTSD of unspeakable treatment well into adulthood!
I volunteer at Battered Women's shelters and worked as a Guardian Ad Litem, advocating for just such children through the court system.
There must be a special place in hell for those who crush the budding flowers!
Thanks for speaking for your cousins, for all the silent victims!
Karenina
Comment Written 15-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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It's definitely very important work that you do. I went into the field of counseling, and part of the reason is because of my cousins. Thank you so much for your kind and thoughtful words, and for reviewing my poem. Hugs.
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Such a needed profession! Few were the children I advocated for that did not benefit from counseling! Thanks for your poetry and for the work that you do! --Karenina
Comment from jenintorre
This poem is very hard hitting and the fact that it is true makes it even more shocking. What is it with men, they get away with this shit and ruin lives. Very well written. Blessings. Jen.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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This poem is very hard hitting and the fact that it is true makes it even more shocking. What is it with men, they get away with this shit and ruin lives. Very well written. Blessings. Jen.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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I'm hoping that God won't let him get away with it without consequence. But you are right, in this world, his consequences have been few if any. Thank you for reading and reviewing. Hugs and blessings.
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I'm hoping that God won't let him get away with it without consequence. But you are right, in this world, his consequences have been few if any. Thank you for reading and reviewing. Hugs and blessings.
Comment from joann r romei
This made me cry, I just dont understand the mental illness people suffer and others pay for, mentally and physically. This story was well written and the words create a powerful image. I hope the woman receive the peace they deserve. Just not fair.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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This made me cry, I just dont understand the mental illness people suffer and others pay for, mentally and physically. This story was well written and the words create a powerful image. I hope the woman receive the peace they deserve. Just not fair.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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No, it's not fair at all. It sickens me. And I feel guilt, even though I was a child as well when this was all going on, I was the older cousin. I feel like I should have done some thing and known more.
The girls are now adults, ages 49, 47, and 45. The oldest suffers from PTSD, anxiety, and depression but is getting along. The middle child has been an addict since she was around 18 years old and is currently in recovery , but struggles daily. The youngest works two jobs and has two kids both adults now, and is married. She has adapted fairly well.
Thank you so much for your comments and for the six star review! I humbly appreciate it. Hugs and blessings to you.
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Takes my breath away, please do not blame yourself, many prayers , sending hugs
Comment from J R DUST
I thought this was a very well wrote out, thought provoking piece of writing that although could be triggering for some was very well conveyed. The simplicity with which it has been wrote was excellent and extremely compelling.
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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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I thought this was a very well wrote out, thought provoking piece of writing that although could be triggering for some was very well conveyed. The simplicity with which it has been wrote was excellent and extremely compelling.
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Comment Written 15-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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Thank you for your kind words. What do you think I could do to improve?
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Leann a good day to you. I hope this finds you well. I really enjoyed this poem, not only was it well written but it told the story well. The subject matter though heartbreaking it unfortunately is one many can relate to. Great Job!
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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Hello Leann a good day to you. I hope this finds you well. I really enjoyed this poem, not only was it well written but it told the story well. The subject matter though heartbreaking it unfortunately is one many can relate to. Great Job!
Comment Written 15-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much. I'm glad the story is appreciated. It was difficult to tell because I love those three girls dearly. I feel some guilt, even though I was a child when they were children.
Thank you also for the six stars. You made my day! Hugs and blessings.
Comment from LisaMay
Your poem has impact with those short emphatic lines and it makes harrowing reading. There are monsters in our midst with child abuse and domestic violence being a societal plague. This seems all the worse because you are describing a personal situation where you know the people involved. How terribly sad for the girls to have that start in life and for it to cloud their lives so markedly.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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Your poem has impact with those short emphatic lines and it makes harrowing reading. There are monsters in our midst with child abuse and domestic violence being a societal plague. This seems all the worse because you are describing a personal situation where you know the people involved. How terribly sad for the girls to have that start in life and for it to cloud their lives so markedly.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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It is terrible! Of the three girls, the first suffers from PTSD, anxiety and depression; the second has been fighting addiction for 40 years; and the third has been adapting the best she can and lives a mostly normal life. Thank you for your comments and review.
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It is awful to think their own father was responsible for such damaged lives.
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Yes, it is. And I hate to admit, but he is my father's brother.
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I hope you had a much better childhood with your own father.
Comment from Paul McFarland
This is quite a story. Many situations like this turn out differently.
Some night when he's fast asleep,
I will find a kitchen knife
Then into his room I'll creep.
And I'll take his rotten life.
Blood I'll let.
No regret.
Paid up debt.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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This is quite a story. Many situations like this turn out differently.
Some night when he's fast asleep,
I will find a kitchen knife
Then into his room I'll creep.
And I'll take his rotten life.
Blood I'll let.
No regret.
Paid up debt.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much. Wow, I like that stanza! It's still a very dysfunctional family. The wife just left him and went out on her own a couple years ago, 50 years after they were married. The girls still feel obligated to take care of him, as he is right now in a rehabilitation facility. He is losing his memory and has broken his back. Anyway, thank you so much for reading and reviewing.
Comment from Aubree Lorraine
That is horrific and incredibly saddening. I'm sorry they had to experience that hell, and I'm glad they made it out alive.
Your poem is captivating and well written.
One little thing ..
From evil â?"kind
Fix that character. Otherwise, excellent job
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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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That is horrific and incredibly saddening. I'm sorry they had to experience that hell, and I'm glad they made it out alive.
Your poem is captivating and well written.
One little thing ..
From evil â?"kind
Fix that character. Otherwise, excellent job
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Comment Written 15-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much. I did not notice the gremlin, and I appreciate that you pointed that out. I'll fix it now. Hugs and blessings.