Comment from BLACKTITANIUM86

Good

I don't know if this really fits the description of the contest, but anytime someone has enough passion to recognize God, I'm all for it. Keep Writing

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2022

T y.
Pl explain your words.
Please, pl clarify your words.
Pl explain for I do not understand your words.
Be sure to explain and clarify your points.
I do not understand what you are pointing at.
I am losing my resources.
Please help me,
What you write is not clear, no expressive to me.
I have right to ask you what you write.
Let me know what your viewpoint is.
Please write clearly and in expressive words, what you try to point at.
Even 0% of your words I do not understand.
Your words are inexpressive.
AGAIN I GIVE YOU YOUR WORDS:
YOU PLEASE READ ONCE MORE:
PLEASE ALSO READ MY WORK:
AND READ MY AUTHOR NOTES.
AND THE WRITING PROMPT:
AND THEN ONLY YOU WRITE.
OTHERWISE, YOU CANNOT UNDERSTAND WHAT YOU HAVE WRITTEN.
T y again.
T y ( = Thank you)
I cannot write my name or identity.
This is a blind contest.
Fanstory does not allow the author or writer to write name or identity.
Hope, you understand.
Here is your review:

BLACKTITANIUM86
2 hours ago

Review For A God's Will
Good

I don't know if this really fits the description of the contest, but anytime someone has enough passion to recognize God, I'm all for it. Keep Writing

Here is Fanstory warning:
This is a blind contest review. Do not "sign" your name or otherwise share your identity.
If you have any question pl ask me.

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

Well all the requirements are met for this short piece.

Not so sure about the sentiments as God used to have a favouring for this type of behaviours and was not above ordering his followers to commit horrendous acts.

All the best
GMG

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2022

Comment from Jane Jane King

Excellent

What an interesting perspective. Thought provoking, very creative, really grabs your attention. Good luck in the contest.
This stands out. Very strong message.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2022

Comment from RPSaxena

Exceptional

Hello Alcreator Litt Dear,
Keeping in mind the Author Note and the declared Contest's Conditions,
What a wonderful piece of Spiritual Fiction this is!
It meets all the required norms, and TRANSPARENTLY depicts its theme.
Impressive phraseology; Enchanting flow, worth reading and enjoying in one short breath.
Picture enhances depth and beauty of the theme.
"God of Heaven will send all war engaged men to Hell tomorrow."
Let it be so! Moreover, sooner the better!!
LAUDABLE Attempt!
SUPERB!!
BEST OF LUCK!!!

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2022

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

If God is listening, I pray that he will at least consider this piece. Scriptural prophesy states that this is an eventual out working of his will. We simply have to wait and remain faithful until the appointed time. Good thought provoking write, and your author notes are very comprehensive and detailed.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2022

Comment from Jay Squires

Good

I am forced to ask an impolite question, I'm afraid. This is obviously your contest. It follows the same pattern as previous contests of the same ilk. My question: Does anyone else enter your contest? Or are you the founder, the judge, and the only entrant? Is the winner of your contest ever announced?

I know I'm talking in the wind. You've never answered by questions in the past.

Jay

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2022

T y.

reply by the author on 16-Mar-2022

Thank you for writing wise words without writing review of my work so like being your grandson and regarding you like my grandfather I request you may please clarify and explain your words you wrote for filling words as review, I do not understand anything, I mean I do not make out your wise words for I find no word is there about the work, about the object of my work, anything about your re-view of my work, so please clarify and explain my like grandfather what you have tried to mean, what is your point, I do not get you, I could not understand your point of view, or viewpoints about your review of my work.
I cannot write my name, or give you my identity, you are wise, Fanstory warning is there, since the work is a blind contest and I cannot write anything about my identity; so, my like grandfather, I earnestly request you which word or which sentence of your so called review of my work is about review of my work, for you are wise, you know what you have written for your review, I do not find a single word as a part of your review of my work; if you do not reply and send your words of clarifications and explanations be sure I will send your review to Tom for action in your favour or not because my honourable grandfather should not be taught how to review, what is a fair review, because in the name of review how an honourable person of your stature, my like beloved grandfather, can write something else not as a review but something else more or beyond a review, how dare I could teach my beloved grandfather how to review or how to write a fair review, because I find you being my beloved like grandfather write something as review without reading the work, without reading the author notes, and without reading the writing prompt and without reading the contest rules and limitations, because you have lost the habit oi reading as evidently it is from your stand of review and you have started thinking yourself the wisest on earth, I am glad to note that you are my beloved like grandfather, and without writing a review you write some filler words to earn member dollars and write something in the name of review simply to express your personal opinion about the author or writer not writing a single word for the review of the work, because it is evident from your activity, you want to prove your wisdom on anything and everything but without reading (as your action proves and it is self-explanatory) the work you write on the plea of review.

I again give you a copy of your review so that you can understand what you have written in the name of review, if anything but filling words in the name of review:

Good
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

I am forced to ask an impolite question, I'm afraid. This is obviously your contest. It follows the same pattern as previous contests of the same ilk. My question: Does anyone else enter your contest? Or are you the founder, the judge, and the only entrant? Is the winner of your contest ever announced?

I know I'm talking in the wind. You've never answered by questions in the past.

Jay
Comment Written 15-Mar-2022

Now being your grandson like person, I could not find a single word for review of my work.

You re-read and please explain and clarify what words or which sentence you have written as review. I know you may avoid replying on many pleas, but I want your words of explanations and clarifications to each of your review.

Because, in all other reviews (you plead to call or make or say them as review, but no single of your review is review of any of my work, because you have lost the habit or power of reading a work before writing a review for the same.

I am waiting to get or receive or read your wise explanations and clarifications.

I cannot write my name etc for identity for it is a blind contest.

reply by the author on 16-Mar-2022

Thank you for writing a review.
Please send your reply with your clarifications and explanation to your words on your review.
Just reply my like grandfather and send automatically I will receive your honourable and wise explanations and clarifications.
Please, please do not avoid or escape replying on some assumptions.
Please do not disappoint me to learn from you the art and style of reviewing so that I can follow and apply your art and style of reviewing.

If you do not reply I may send your review to Tom asking his view about your new art and style of reviewing at this site.

I am just waiting to know your clarifications and explanations to your words you used in your review of my work.

reply by the author on 16-Mar-2022

I am still waiting your clarifications and explanations to your words you wrote as review of my work.

Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

If people do not abide with the Ten Commandments, God will send men and women to the opposite direction of heaven. He is a God that does forgive; but how many times will He forgive us if we do not believe in Him?

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2022

Comment from Mia Twysted

Excellent

I stumbled a bit when reading this piece. It didn't flow right off the tongue. However, it does speak volumes about what is going on in the world today. We are "engaged" in war not "tomorrow" but today.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2022

Comment from Wayne Fowler

Excellent

You did it. Twelve words.
But how am I to conjure one hundred and fifty characters for a twelve word piece? I wish you had used the word 'bad' in place of 'ala, though. When attacked, you must either engage in war, or be slaughtered, or worse ... lose your freedom.
Best wishes.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2022

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Dear Mystery Writer,

Well. Hmmm... looks like you have met all the qualifications and requirements of this crazy, detailed contest. *smile* I must judge you on that alone - which is good, because I do not agree with the content of your poem at ALL. *smile*

We know from Biblical history that many of God's best heroes were warriors and soldiers on the battlefields - that they even killed many men! I think of King David immediately.

The powerful, overriding knowledge is that only God Himself can judge these things and certainly not mere mortals. When men are charged to follow the commands of their government - as in the Bible - I'm not sure what other options they have.

Thanks.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2022