Cloak of faith.
A poem48 total reviews
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I enjoyed yet another of your poems. The artwork you chose is beautiful as is the sentiment. Your writing has a lyrical pace which I enjoy. The rhymes work well.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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I enjoyed yet another of your poems. The artwork you chose is beautiful as is the sentiment. Your writing has a lyrical pace which I enjoy. The rhymes work well.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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Thanks so much for your great comments and sage review Helen, blessings Roy
Comment from Ulla
Hi Roy, thank you yet again for having written such a beautiful poem. Yes, you're right about one thing, and that is that I have faith in the sun rising every morning and that night follows day. What I don't believe is that there's an entity called God who controls all that.
If there was, Ukraine wouldn't be happening. Some individuals shouldn't even be called humans. If there was a God how could he or she create a monster like Putin?
I'm sorry I didn't mean to be so confrontational, but I got carried away by current events. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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Hi Roy, thank you yet again for having written such a beautiful poem. Yes, you're right about one thing, and that is that I have faith in the sun rising every morning and that night follows day. What I don't believe is that there's an entity called God who controls all that.
If there was, Ukraine wouldn't be happening. Some individuals shouldn't even be called humans. If there was a God how could he or she create a monster like Putin?
I'm sorry I didn't mean to be so confrontational, but I got carried away by current events. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 05-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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God never ever interferes with the free will of men, you forget this is not of His design, it?s the will of men. He allows you to choose unbelief, Even though that?s what you choose, not what you know for sure. Why don?t you ask? Just in case! I was actually an atheist until I realised that was intellectual suicide, then He turned up!. Thank you, blessings Roy
Comment from amahra
You get a six just for the artwork, though the poem is worth it as well. I loved the poem, and as usual, your rhyming is terrific. And thank you for the scriptures in your Author Notes.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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You get a six just for the artwork, though the poem is worth it as well. I loved the poem, and as usual, your rhyming is terrific. And thank you for the scriptures in your Author Notes.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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Thanks Amahra, for your great comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy
Comment from dragonpoet
Roy,
This poem shows us that faith is a gift we should treasure not just let die.
We should work on it to make it strong not hide it away sometimes.
It also shows you have an evangelitic heart that wants to plant the seed in others.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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Roy,
This poem shows us that faith is a gift we should treasure not just let die.
We should work on it to make it strong not hide it away sometimes.
It also shows you have an evangelitic heart that wants to plant the seed in others.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 05-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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Thanks Joan, for your excellent comments and review, blessings Roy
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Any time, Roy.
Joan.
Comment from MissMerri
This is a beautiful poem, wise in its teaching and melodic in its sounds. I enjoyed this very much, and especially enjoyed reading the scriptures in your author notes. My favorite lines, I think, were these: "Yet this I know, one's faith's a gift,/that lights the dark, a mountain shift." The idea of moving mountains is rather exciting to me. LOL
One problem only... didn't you want to have a space between lines 8 and 9? I'd like that. Thanks for another beautiful faith poem. I'm all out of sixes, but here's the best I can do: ********************** ~ MM
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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This is a beautiful poem, wise in its teaching and melodic in its sounds. I enjoyed this very much, and especially enjoyed reading the scriptures in your author notes. My favorite lines, I think, were these: "Yet this I know, one's faith's a gift,/that lights the dark, a mountain shift." The idea of moving mountains is rather exciting to me. LOL
One problem only... didn't you want to have a space between lines 8 and 9? I'd like that. Thanks for another beautiful faith poem. I'm all out of sixes, but here's the best I can do: ********************** ~ MM
Comment Written 05-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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Thanks Adonna, for your excellent comments and a great review, (the fifth line carried on I thought, that?s why,) blessings Roy
Comment from Versch
You are definitely spreading that seeds of faith, Roy. I always learn the words of God from your poem, the verses in the Bible are like food to my soul. This is another excellent poetry. Thank you and many blessings to you! Ver
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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You are definitely spreading that seeds of faith, Roy. I always learn the words of God from your poem, the verses in the Bible are like food to my soul. This is another excellent poetry. Thank you and many blessings to you! Ver
Comment Written 05-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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Thanks Ver for your terrific comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Sanku
To a logical mind faith does not make any sense. But faith is like a crutch providing stability when one loses one's balance..I liked your poem very much .This war torn days we need a lot of faith...
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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To a logical mind faith does not make any sense. But faith is like a crutch providing stability when one loses one's balance..I liked your poem very much .This war torn days we need a lot of faith...
Comment Written 05-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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Thanks Sanku, for your great comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy
Comment from Heather Burroughs
What a beautiful poem! Your author notes are spot on and I appreciate you for sharing your beliefs and knowledge m. Thank you for sharing. Many blessings to you
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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What a beautiful poem! Your author notes are spot on and I appreciate you for sharing your beliefs and knowledge m. Thank you for sharing. Many blessings to you
Comment Written 05-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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Thanks Heather, for your great comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy
Comment from Mickamus J
Thank you for your sharing. It seems like it is a start for people of faith to begin. We are in a place where we need to be for our faith to have regard for it to grow.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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Thank you for your sharing. It seems like it is a start for people of faith to begin. We are in a place where we need to be for our faith to have regard for it to grow.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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Thanks Tom for your great comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy
Comment from lauralumummu
This is lovely! We really need faith right now without it nothing matters. I like the idea of wrapping up in a cloak of faith. The photo is stunning maybe a little like heaven. Well done Roy. God bless, Laura
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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This is lovely! We really need faith right now without it nothing matters. I like the idea of wrapping up in a cloak of faith. The photo is stunning maybe a little like heaven. Well done Roy. God bless, Laura
Comment Written 04-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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Thanks Laura for these stellar comments and a super review, blessings Roy