Words of Worth
In the book the King found...21 total reviews
Comment from Regina Elliott
Wondrous rhyming poem about the Good Book. So
stellar penned. I love rhyming
verses. Keep up the great
writing. I hope you have a
very creative year with an
ever flowing pen. All the
best.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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Wondrous rhyming poem about the Good Book. So
stellar penned. I love rhyming
verses. Keep up the great
writing. I hope you have a
very creative year with an
ever flowing pen. All the
best.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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Thank you for this great review and your kind words. :)
Comment from Anne Johnston
Very well done on this rhyming poem, uplifting the Word of God as the answer to the world's problems. I like the lines:
"The word of God brings peace to all,
even the boldest Kings who fall."
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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Very well done on this rhyming poem, uplifting the Word of God as the answer to the world's problems. I like the lines:
"The word of God brings peace to all,
even the boldest Kings who fall."
Comment Written 28-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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Thank you for reading my poem, it's always nice to hear from you. :)
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You are very welcome
Comment from Wendy G
This is a very interesting and well presented piece. Yes, God's Word does bring peace to every individual who reads it, from the lowest to the highest. The rhyme and metre flow smoothly and well. Best wishes for your entry in the Rhyming contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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This is a very interesting and well presented piece. Yes, God's Word does bring peace to every individual who reads it, from the lowest to the highest. The rhyme and metre flow smoothly and well. Best wishes for your entry in the Rhyming contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 27-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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Thank you for this terrific review, it's very appreciated. :)
Comment from AprilViolet
Very well done! Is this a true story? Or is this a wonderful testament to your imagination. I was really invested in the story which shows how well you have written it. Six stars!
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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Very well done! Is this a true story? Or is this a wonderful testament to your imagination. I was really invested in the story which shows how well you have written it. Six stars!
Comment Written 27-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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Thank you for making my night so special with this great review. :)
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is an excellent written poem. It has a great flow and Rhyme scheme.
Though many wars have raged through ages,
the King found within those pages...The word of God brings peace to all,even the boldest Kings who fall.great photo to compliment your words. All the best in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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This is an excellent written poem. It has a great flow and Rhyme scheme.
Though many wars have raged through ages,
the King found within those pages...The word of God brings peace to all,even the boldest Kings who fall.great photo to compliment your words. All the best in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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Thank you for this wonderful review and for your kind words. It makes my night! :)
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Your welcome
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Your welcome 🙂
Comment from jessizero
This was a very good poem following the aabb pattern. It was inspiring and entertaining, and the last line was powerful. Keep up the good work. Best wishes!
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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This was a very good poem following the aabb pattern. It was inspiring and entertaining, and the last line was powerful. Keep up the good work. Best wishes!
Comment Written 27-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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Thank you for this stellar review and your kind words, both are appreciated. :)
Comment from WriterHeather
This is a flawlessly written epic tale you have penned for the contest! I absolutely loved reading this. You never cease to impress! I think a lot of people will be touched by this poignant piece.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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This is a flawlessly written epic tale you have penned for the contest! I absolutely loved reading this. You never cease to impress! I think a lot of people will be touched by this poignant piece.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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Thank you for this stellar review, it's very appreciated. :)
Comment from lindafisher
If I had a six it would be yours dear poet. You have fulfilled the brief admirably, your rhyming in this contest entry is excellent. The story also is worth a six.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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If I had a six it would be yours dear poet. You have fulfilled the brief admirably, your rhyming in this contest entry is excellent. The story also is worth a six.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much for this terrific review, it makes my day! :)
Comment from Candice Cermak
Wow, I love when people write on such topics as this because I just have no ability to. They always come out crappy. This is great! The only thing is the last two lines of the first two stanzas are the same and I think you did that on purpose but it sounds weird still. To me anyway.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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Wow, I love when people write on such topics as this because I just have no ability to. They always come out crappy. This is great! The only thing is the last two lines of the first two stanzas are the same and I think you did that on purpose but it sounds weird still. To me anyway.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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I think you're right! I changed it a little, tell me what you think. I appreciate your help, thanks for your great suggestion and this nice review. :)
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Love it!
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
You have a great story with a perfect picture. It sounds like the book was the bible. You wrote a great story. One with a powerful message. I enjoyed reading your story. Keep up the great writing. Good Luck.
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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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You have a great story with a perfect picture. It sounds like the book was the bible. You wrote a great story. One with a powerful message. I enjoyed reading your story. Keep up the great writing. Good Luck.
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Comment Written 27-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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Thank you for reading my poem and for this nice review. :)
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You are welcome.