Paw Prints on Your Heart
Letting go, even though it hurts37 total reviews
Comment from Thatguypk
I can see why this was a contest winner. Everyone who has ever owned and loved a pet (especially a dog) will read this and weep. I'm a dog lover. You have summed up so beautifully, how we all want to imagine our dog's voice. Moving stuff.
PK
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I can see why this was a contest winner. Everyone who has ever owned and loved a pet (especially a dog) will read this and weep. I'm a dog lover. You have summed up so beautifully, how we all want to imagine our dog's voice. Moving stuff.
PK
Comment Written 03-Mar-2022
Comment from BLACKTITANIUM86
This is fire! And I'm sorry to hear about your loss. But not to jump off the topic at hand, but you did well with this poem. Keep Writing. And don't forget to stop by to talk. Stay Connecte
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2022
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This is fire! And I'm sorry to hear about your loss. But not to jump off the topic at hand, but you did well with this poem. Keep Writing. And don't forget to stop by to talk. Stay Connecte
Comment Written 03-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much!
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Melissa a good day to you. I hope this finds you well. I liked your writing prompt entry, it had a nice flow and touching words. Congrats on the win. Have a great day!
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2022
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Hello Melissa a good day to you. I hope this finds you well. I liked your writing prompt entry, it had a nice flow and touching words. Congrats on the win. Have a great day!
Comment Written 03-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much! That means so much to me.
Comment from Bridge
A very beautiful and touching poem. I absolutely loved the last line of the poem. The artwork also adds to the appeal of the poem. Very well done.
With regards
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A very beautiful and touching poem. I absolutely loved the last line of the poem. The artwork also adds to the appeal of the poem. Very well done.
With regards
Comment Written 03-Mar-2022
Comment from royowen
We've got the paw prints of 12 cats, and 4 dogs firmly imprinted on our hearts, we remember every quirky mannerism and adorable way they had about them, as different as any human being, well done, blessings Roy
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We've got the paw prints of 12 cats, and 4 dogs firmly imprinted on our hearts, we remember every quirky mannerism and adorable way they had about them, as different as any human being, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 03-Mar-2022
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
AWESOME! Yes, Mystery Author, pets give love unconditionally. Your contest entry is well thought out with good rhymes and formatting. Your true words create great imagery of life with one's pet and the bond between owner and dog.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
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AWESOME! Yes, Mystery Author, pets give love unconditionally. Your contest entry is well thought out with good rhymes and formatting. Your true words create great imagery of life with one's pet and the bond between owner and dog.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 02-Mar-2022
Comment from Boogienights
This is a wonderful love story, one you don't hear everyday. Pets are fantastic, dogs, cats, it doesn't matter. They add so much to life. Best of luck in the contest. :)
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This is a wonderful love story, one you don't hear everyday. Pets are fantastic, dogs, cats, it doesn't matter. They add so much to life. Best of luck in the contest. :)
Comment Written 02-Mar-2022
Comment from Anne-Marie brison
Dear author,
This is such a sweet poem!!!! A real pleasure to read this. Thank you so much for sharing this with the community!! May God bless you and your family!!!
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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Dear author,
This is such a sweet poem!!!! A real pleasure to read this. Thank you so much for sharing this with the community!! May God bless you and your family!!!
Comment Written 02-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much! It means the world to me honestly
Comment from tfawcus
Love this last line: For my paw prints are now forever, imprinted on your heart.
Framing the poem from the dog's point of view is most effective.
One suggestion: When our eyes first met, I knew that this is (was) love..
A heart-wrenching poem that many animal lovers will be able to identify with. Well done.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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Love this last line: For my paw prints are now forever, imprinted on your heart.
Framing the poem from the dog's point of view is most effective.
One suggestion: When our eyes first met, I knew that this is (was) love..
A heart-wrenching poem that many animal lovers will be able to identify with. Well done.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much! It means the world to me honestly
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is a lovely rhyming poem about the bond shared between man/woman and their dog. Though, for me first/hurt aren't a good rhyme, it really doesn't matter in the context of this write. I love the final line, and it is so true. Good luck in the contest.
cheers.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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This is a lovely rhyming poem about the bond shared between man/woman and their dog. Though, for me first/hurt aren't a good rhyme, it really doesn't matter in the context of this write. I love the final line, and it is so true. Good luck in the contest.
cheers.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much! It means the world to me honestly