One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from BLACKTITANIUM86
This is a great Haiku! For, not every poem like
this has rhythm that puts everything into perspective.
And paints a vivid picture for the reader. And that's
dope!! Keep writing. And Stay Connected
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2022
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This is a great Haiku! For, not every poem like
this has rhythm that puts everything into perspective.
And paints a vivid picture for the reader. And that's
dope!! Keep writing. And Stay Connected
Comment Written 01-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much, BT, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your poem- good artwork picture- sunrise on the wings of dawn- would Iike to understand more in notes about what inspired you to write the poem always interesting- good job
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
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I like your poem- good artwork picture- sunrise on the wings of dawn- would Iike to understand more in notes about what inspired you to write the poem always interesting- good job
Comment Written 01-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much, AP. I appreciate your time and kind review. Blessings.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Jennifer Keeley
Your words say it all. I think this poem reflects a lot of feelings people can get when the sun rises. The Smoky Mountains are a gorgeous site and the picture you put with your poem made the words extremely meaningful. This was nice work!
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
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Your words say it all. I think this poem reflects a lot of feelings people can get when the sun rises. The Smoky Mountains are a gorgeous site and the picture you put with your poem made the words extremely meaningful. This was nice work!
Comment Written 01-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much, Jennifer. I appreciate your time and review.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from royowen
I love that passage from Psalm 139, we can never flee from the presence of the Lord, why would we want to anyway? Good job Gypsy, this is beautifully written, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
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I love that passage from Psalm 139, we can never flee from the presence of the Lord, why would we want to anyway? Good job Gypsy, this is beautifully written, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 01-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much, Roy. I appreciate your time and review.
Gypsy hugs
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Welcome Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
Oh, I love it that you included that part of Psalm 139!! I always think of that verse when I am on an early morning airplane flight. Beautiful picture and what a great depiction of the Smokey Mountains in your verse!!
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
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Oh, I love it that you included that part of Psalm 139!! I always think of that verse when I am on an early morning airplane flight. Beautiful picture and what a great depiction of the Smokey Mountains in your verse!!
Comment Written 01-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much, Helen. I love that Psalm too. I was inspired by your poem. I should add that in my author notes.
Have a wonderful day, sister. Blessings.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mark D. R.
Gypsy,
I have seen those mountains at dawn. Your 5-7-5 entry reminds me of that visit years ago.
Possibly your mountains should be a proper name and capitalized. Of course, the image does not guarantee it is the Great Smoky Mountains although the source is Gatlinburg, TN.
Very nice overall presentation that provides a vivid image of that scene.
Mark
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
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Gypsy,
I have seen those mountains at dawn. Your 5-7-5 entry reminds me of that visit years ago.
Possibly your mountains should be a proper name and capitalized. Of course, the image does not guarantee it is the Great Smoky Mountains although the source is Gatlinburg, TN.
Very nice overall presentation that provides a vivid image of that scene.
Mark
Comment Written 01-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much for your review and feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Pangalactic
This whisks me away to those mountains of my family stomping grounds, if these are the smoky mountains of Alberta. My mom and dad grew up there.
Great wee poem
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
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This whisks me away to those mountains of my family stomping grounds, if these are the smoky mountains of Alberta. My mom and dad grew up there.
Great wee poem
Comment Written 01-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much for your exceptional review.
Gypsy
Comment from Theodore McDowell
Great poem for the contest. The last line is wonderful: on the wings of dawn. Great imagery throughout the short verse and makes the images very vivid. Great Job.
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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
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Great poem for the contest. The last line is wonderful: on the wings of dawn. Great imagery throughout the short verse and makes the images very vivid. Great Job.
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Comment Written 01-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much for your exceptional review.
Gypsy