Blood on the sand
A swap qatrain.58 total reviews
Comment from lauralumummu
Thanks for this your faith always resonates with me. I like the way you used the color and the message that can inspire. Hope you are well. God bless you, Laura.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022
Thanks for this your faith always resonates with me. I like the way you used the color and the message that can inspire. Hope you are well. God bless you, Laura.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022
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Thanks Laura for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Mrs. KT
I so appreciate the swap quatrain format, Roy, and your message is well-executed within this form.
Your words speak of your unyielding faith in the face of naysayers and distractors. You hold firm...
Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022
I so appreciate the swap quatrain format, Roy, and your message is well-executed within this form.
Your words speak of your unyielding faith in the face of naysayers and distractors. You hold firm...
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 29-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022
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Thanks Diane, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is such a nicely written poem . Lovely style of writing. It has a nice flow and rhyme scheme. Awesome photo to compliment your words as well. Very well done.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022
This is such a nicely written poem . Lovely style of writing. It has a nice flow and rhyme scheme. Awesome photo to compliment your words as well. Very well done.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022
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Thanks Joanne, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from The Mom/DarleneThomson
Dear Roy,
A wonderful poem about your faith. The flow was wonderful and the words creative. I thought this was a contest entry but I can't see any posting about that. Great job my friend.
Blessings,
Darlene
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022
Dear Roy,
A wonderful poem about your faith. The flow was wonderful and the words creative. I thought this was a contest entry but I can't see any posting about that. Great job my friend.
Blessings,
Darlene
Comment Written 29-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022
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Thanks Darlene, for these lovely comments and a kind review, blessings Roy
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Your welcome
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is really beautiful and sounds almost like a hymn. It is so good to know Christ buys us with his blood and frees us from shame of our misdoings. It is also a lovely picture.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022
This is really beautiful and sounds almost like a hymn. It is so good to know Christ buys us with his blood and frees us from shame of our misdoings. It is also a lovely picture.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022
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Thanks Carol, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from harmony13
The author's words were reassuring, strong, powerful and creative. As I
read these words I felt secure in knowing God is always with me. The
poem conveys even during rough times God's grace prevails.
The artwork goes well with the theme and words of this poem.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022
The author's words were reassuring, strong, powerful and creative. As I
read these words I felt secure in knowing God is always with me. The
poem conveys even during rough times God's grace prevails.
The artwork goes well with the theme and words of this poem.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022
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Thanks Maria, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Ulla
Hi Roy, so as mere human you face temptation at every turn, but your faith is too strong to let you fall into any pitfalls.
Your writing is so strong and just loved to read this for its imagery and rhythm. Ulla,:)))
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022
Hi Roy, so as mere human you face temptation at every turn, but your faith is too strong to let you fall into any pitfalls.
Your writing is so strong and just loved to read this for its imagery and rhythm. Ulla,:)))
Comment Written 29-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022
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Thanks Ulla, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022
I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 29-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022
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Thanks Raul, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Another lovely poem to put in one of your books, Roy. This poem tells us how Christ has come into your life and changed it dramatically. You are safe in God's love and always will be, no one can take you away from Him.
Simply lovely, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022
Another lovely poem to put in one of your books, Roy. This poem tells us how Christ has come into your life and changed it dramatically. You are safe in God's love and always will be, no one can take you away from Him.
Simply lovely, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 29-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022
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Thanks Sandra, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Gee
Thank you sir for another nice poem
Very well written and great tribute to Christ
We appreciate reading your poetry
Thanks for sharing with us.
Gee
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022
Thank you sir for another nice poem
Very well written and great tribute to Christ
We appreciate reading your poetry
Thanks for sharing with us.
Gee
Comment Written 29-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022
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Thanks Gee, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy