The Tor
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Swirling Emotions"Adventures around & upon a hill
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Comment from Melodie Michelle
Excellent story my friend and I love the characters and the wavy they interact together throughout this piece! The storyline is captivating and held my attention;-) Extremely well written and well thought out!
One thing to consider is to add appropriate imagery that ties the presentation together to the actual story;-) maybe a warm color to make it pop out!
Many blessings to you and your family;-)
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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2021
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Excellent story my friend and I love the characters and the wavy they interact together throughout this piece! The storyline is captivating and held my attention;-) Extremely well written and well thought out!
One thing to consider is to add appropriate imagery that ties the presentation together to the actual story;-) maybe a warm color to make it pop out!
Many blessings to you and your family;-)
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Comment Written 18-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2021
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Thank you for your involved review and for your return to my story. I'm glad you are enjoying it. Sending fluffy energy your way.