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She Writes

a 2-10-2

15 total reviews 
Comment from Earl Corp
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You did a good job with the contest prompt. You wrote a 2-10-2 that made perfect sense. I really enjoyed reading this piece. Very nice job. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 28-Nov-2021
    Thanks, Earl
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Your contest entry is in good form, Mystery Author. Good job with the syllable count per line. The words plus picture pair perfectly. I like the theme of your poem.
Bet wishes in the contest, Jan

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 28-Nov-2021
    Thank you, Jan
Comment from Lana Marie
Exceptional
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Well, you accomplished the writing prompt two syllables, 10 and then two again. I do like the picture that you used, I think that's where a lot of us first started writing was born on our "diaries"/journals" that we got as young children.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 28-Nov-2021
    Thank you, Lana, for the terrific review.
Comment from royowen
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What an idyllic picture of a young girl writing and reflecting, I think dreaming starts at a very young age, and so it should, it did for me. A beautifully scribed 2/10/2 post, good luck, blessings Roy

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 Comment Written 28-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 28-Nov-2021
    Thank you, Roy
reply by royowen on 29-Nov-2021
    Most welcome
Comment from L. Stewart
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Gorgeous entry. Simplistic and effective. Love the choice of picture also, inspiring young minds to be imaginative and share their thoughts, even if it's just personally.


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 Comment Written 28-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 28-Nov-2021
    Thank you, L.