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The Gift of Life

A Haibun for Raffaelina

34 total reviews 
Comment from BethShelby
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Thank you for this meaning Haibun. It was beautiful story. I really apprecate you including the video of Denzel Washington. I have appreciated his acting ablity, but I'm pleased to see a side of him I didn't know about. I have been praying for Ralf, and I have sent her personal messages to let her know I care. FanStory is a community of caring people who come to out support those who need our prayers and loving concern.

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 21-Oct-2021
    Thank you very much for the lovely review and for the kind words and an effort towards Rafelina. She needs us all so much. I?m so glad she has her trust in the Lord so I don?t worry about her outcome. I know she is in good hands.

    Sending love my very best to you and yours as always,
    Sally XOs
Comment from Sherry Asbury
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God bless you, sweet Sally, for this heartfelt and beautiful write. I pray for Ralf every day and beg God to let her live as comfortably as she can. I love the dear story of the family and how it showed God at work. Many of us have illnesses and to love "God we rise on legs that will not hold us, get into our wheelchairs, and roll through another day. You are so precious Sally and I love you!!

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 21-Oct-2021
    I love you too, Miss Sherry, from the first day we met on FanStory. I hope this blesses you as well and gives you hope and peace in your circumstances. Miraculously, God has extended my eyesight so that I can do some more writing. I know he loves it that I do these things in His name and for His purposes.

    Thank you again for this sweet and kind review and generous stars. Love and blessings always, Sally XOs?xo?
Comment from dragonpoet
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Sally,
This is a well done haibun. It shows what a true loving marriage is and you indeed see God in thier love. Sad to hear about Raffaelina. I will put her on my prayer list.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 21-Oct-2021
    Thank you very much for the lovely review and for your prayers. It is so appreciated. Sending all my very best to you and yours as always, Sally XOs
reply by dragonpoet on 21-Oct-2021
    You are most kindly welcome, Sally
    Joan


Comment from Pearl Edwards
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Sometimes when life seems to much, we don't have to look far to realise there's others going through so much, and can still smile. A beautiful posting Sally, and I do send Raffaelina all positive thoughts.
Lovely words.
cheers.
valda

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 21-Oct-2021
    Thank you for the lovely review and kind words, Valda. It means so much. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sal XOs
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Our health is the most important asset in life and your fine words here confirm that. I did not know that Raffaelina was sick, my prayers are with her, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 21-Oct-2021
    Thank you very much for your wonderful review and kind comments. Thank you so much for your prayers too. Sending love my very best to you and yours as always, Sally XOs
Comment from lauralumummu
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This is an incredibly heartwarming story in a poem. Yes, life is a gift and love is such a blessing. I hope you are. God Bless Lauralu

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 21-Oct-2021
    Hello there Laura! It was so good to see you thank you so much for the beautiful review and generous stars! The gift of love is a blessing and healing. God has a strange way of healing us sometimes and helps us to carry-on.

    Sending along my very best to you and yours as always,
    Sally XOs
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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This piece is excellent in every respect--smoothly flowing, vividly descriptive, and so very moving--defining what real love is and how it weathers all.

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 21-Oct-2021
    Thank you very much for the wonderful review and kind comments. Love has great power and the power to heal and do so many things. Sometimes, God uses the ordinary things to work His miracles. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sal XOs
Comment from l.raven
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Hi Sally, I will put her in my prayers...I'm so sorry she is so sick...I'm sure she will love reading your story told...and your beautiful poem...God always holds us in his hands...He knows true love when He sees it...

your story had me in tears...my mom and dad watch Jeopardy all week...and even at 91...mom still knew the answers...
dad was her nurse about the last year of his life...even with a massive brain tumor...he still bathed and cooked for her...it's wonderful to have someone who loves you with all they are...

I love your story told my sweet friend...and love your poem...your picture is just beautiful...all very nicely written...love you...Linda xxoo




 Comment Written 20-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 21-Oct-2021
    Your loving parents explains you! So glad to hear about this. My parents didn?t love each other at all I?m surprised they lasted as long as they did and made four children. I?m always so blessed to see the power of love, resident in the ordinary things: taking care of each other, making a meal together, and just loving on each other every day. I see God?s mighty power in the simple things.

    Thank you so much again for the beautiful review and stars. Mostly, thank you for the gift that you are to me and so many.
    Sally XOs?xo?
reply by l.raven on 21-Oct-2021
    your so welcome beautiful girl...

    I'm so sorry your parents were like that...
    but when we grow up...it's the life we choose
    that counts...and you chose to be amazing...
    and a wonderful friend...God has truly blessed me...
    always welcome in everyway...much love...xxoo

Comment from Debbie Pope
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This is such a sweet thing to do for Raffaelina. I had no idea that she was so sick. I will definitely send her a message. I remember when she was so supportive when Mastery was sick. She is a sweet lady.
You have done your good deed today, and I enjoyed your post.

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 21-Oct-2021
    Thank you for the lovely review and for the prayers and care. Raffaelina is a dear one. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sal XOs
Comment from Wendy G
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Your story is a brief resume of what it means to truly love some-one and to serve that other person and God, with willingness and thankfulness. Your story was bot a pleasure to read, and a personal challenge!
Wendy

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 21-Oct-2021
    Thank you for the lovely review and kind words. Love has great power to heal, restore, repurpose, and lift up. I know this kind of love with my husband. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sal XOs