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Secrets in the Wind

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A story of loss, deceit, murder and crime

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Comment from BethShelby
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Great job on this reunion and kicking up the romanace between Garth and Allie. I'm wondering how Jasmine fits into this story. I know their conversation was on Allie mind when Garth made his appearance. You are still writing beautiful. I hope things might be easing a bit for you.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
    Actually, while sitting in a cold hospital hallway, I needed a focus so my brain "heated up" and a few pieces fell together. Book 4 is on brew!

    Thank you so much!

    Carol
reply by BethShelby on 27-Sep-2021
    I'm so glad to here that. Are the same characters involved? You're dropping hints at what is going on in your life.It envolves a hospital.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
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Alls well that ends well. Allie and Garth are good to go and Annie's safe. But I don't think this is the end, is it?
All the dots are connected nicely, so far.

Ralf

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
    Oh My Ralf... thank you so much for sharing another of the precious stars, but more importantly for loving this chapter. Your enjoyment and stars reassures me I am doing okay regardless of the darkness around me.

    Hugs, Carol
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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Brilliant! You nailed the intense interaction--romantic undercurrent builds to electrical explosion. Intriguing side-plot of missing sister. Reminder--resolve fate of the poisoned nurse.

Katherine was a [gentlewoman=>gentle woman]

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
    Fate of poor nurse is solved and Jasmine will lead us to Book 4.

    Actually, while sitting in a cold hospital hallway, I needed a focus so my brain "heated up" and a few pieces fell together. Jasmine was one of them.

    Hugs, Carol
reply by Elizabeth Emerald on 27-Sep-2021
    Aaah--another book in the series!
Comment from Wendy G
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So glad to areas another chapter - many thanks. I am sure it hasn't been easy to write. I am pleased for Annie, and for Garth and Allie - but there is still a lot to resolve!! And now I am curious about where Jasmine will fit in. Many thanks for writing. I'm still enjoying it a lot.
Wendy

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
    Jasmine will bring us to Book 4.... I thought I'd drop a hint or two before we got there. Actually, while sitting in a cold hospital hallway, I needed a focus so my brain "heated up" and a few pieces fell together.

    Hugs, Carol
Comment from karenina
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How have you been very managed another chapter?! So pleased to see it. Things have fallen onto place and there is now time, at last, for bit of blossoming romance...

Will we see Garth and Allie teaming up professionally and personally in your next book?

Very satisfying chapter! Only a few more loose ends to tie!

Hope all is on the upswing for you and yours.

Karenina

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 Comment Written 26-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
    No upswing for sure... but the desire not to lose sight of me in all this darkness is allowing me to catch my breath. Writing and losing myself in my characters is my salvation.

    Thanks for stopping by. Hope all is well.

    Love ya, Carol
reply by karenina on 28-Sep-2021
    I feel the sa!e way about writing!

    Karenina
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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You are going to leave me waiting for the twins to meet right up to the last part, aren't you???!!! This was lovely, though. I'm so happy that Garth and Allie have finally got their act together and had a wonderful bout of passion! And Annie screaming for Sebastian, I loved that part when he came dashing out to be with her. All's well at the ranch!! Well done, Carol, this was brilliant!! Love and hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx

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 Comment Written 25-Sep-2021