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Beyond Redemption

You can't take back cruel words immortalized in text

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Comment from royowen
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An interesting dilemma, but in the words of that would be philosopher this too will pass, and.it will, I just hope it won't leave any nasty, invisible wounds behind, well done Liz, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021
    They've forgiven each other--not so sure that's a good thing--the issues continue to fester.
reply by royowen on 22-Sep-2021
    That?s true
Comment from Judy Lawless
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One thing about today's technology, we can record proof of all the verbal attacks we receive,as ammunition for what? It only makes us more miserable I think. So sorry for Lauren.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
    They've forgiven each other--not so sure that's a good thing--the issues continue to fester.
Comment from Father Flaps
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Hi Liz,
Once you hit "Send", it's engraved in concrete. You can't take it back. It's there, to be read and re-read over and over again. I love that last word you used... "moot". I wonder how it made it into the dictionary. It seems ... out there, somehow. But I guess it's like their relationship... out there. Can it endure? I'm thinking not. Why do girls get into a relationship with these guys? The world is full of eligible bachelors. They're like grapes. I think of Indiana Jones when the old knight said: "You have chosen ...wisely." in selecting the Holy Grail.
https://youtu.be/-_IlNbsILLE
Tell Lauren to be more selective. She doesn't need all this crap.
Hugs,
Kimbob

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
    They've forgiven each other--not so sure that's a good thing--the issues continue to fester.
Comment from Theodore McDowell
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A very nice wordsmithing throughout this story, with creative use of words. Also a nice commentary on the texting generation!!!!!!!!!!!!!I liked this post a lot.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
    They've forgiven each other--not so sure that's a good thing--the issues continue to fester.
Comment from BethShelby
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I guess that is a point in favor of texting. If been saying it is a stupid way to communicate when you can talk on the phone. However I'm starting to rethink that. Memory isn't as reliable as something written.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021
    They've forgiven each other--not so sure that's a good thing--the issues continue to fester.
Comment from Sanku
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Children these days! The trouble with texting is that you can't slip away later. The proof is there !
I am sure they will soon kiss and make up. Unless the exchange was the result of some basic difference ..lets keep the fingers crossed!

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021
    They've forgiven each other--not so sure that's a good thing--the issues continue to fester.
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
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I read your earlier post too about their relationship gone 'Kaput'. Well, I don't understand why they are exchanging toxic texts. My advice would be to block the ex's cell number so that he doesn't screw up your daughter's happiness. Forget such a guy existed in her life and move on. Life will have better things to offer. All the best to her.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021
    They've forgiven each other--not so sure that's a good thing--the issues continue to fester.
Comment from karenina
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It is WAY to easy to click send! There ought to be a warning series....

1). You have hit send

2.). Would you like to review before sendng?

3.). For your protection "send" will be disabled for five minutes.

4). Are you POSITIVE???

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I know. I KNOW! But in frenzied texting there is no emotional filter!

Lover's quarrels were so much less combustible when you had to sit and write a letter, find an envelope, lick a stamp...

On the other hand? They tied! Maybe it'll all blow over...

Via text. A sad emoji.

"Miss you."

"And they lived happily ever...well, until the next techno-spat!"

Egads!

Karenina




 Comment Written 18-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
    They've forgiven each other--not so sure that's a good thing--the issues continue to fester.

    Brilliant idea about texting warning!
reply by karenina on 28-Sep-2021
    I wish there had been "e-mail warnings" back in the day!

    Karenina
Comment from Wendy G
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Oh dear! Texts are just another way for the knife to be twisted when relationships fall apart! That's sad ...but I think they were on-going issues if I remember, so maybe it's for the best.
Wendy

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
    They've forgiven each other--not so sure that's a good thing--the issues continue to fester.
Comment from lyenochka
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That's sad. But you did mention that the relationship was strained. It's interesting to have arguments via texts which keep the hurtful things in writing. Hope it works out for the best.

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 Comment Written 18-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021
    They've forgiven each other--not so sure that's a good thing--the issues continue to fester.