Comment from Janee Tarmey

Excellent

I love that this includes a section for describing the cast. The selection of cast members was beautifully decided. The starting line being I'm scared really helps grab our attention and really made it easy for me to want to read more. I almost wish we could see some more acts or a whole screen write. It was intriguing to a variety of audiences without being to chromatic. It also has perfect diction and grammar errors seemed slim to none. I'm not best on that front so I won't input it now. However, well done and thank you for sharing your skills.

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 Comment Written 07-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021

Thanks so much for your review and comments, Janee. I'm really impressed by the thought you put into it. There are been previous scenes and and a second act coming up if I can manage it. judi

Comment from Eunice Amero

Excellent

A very good play. I always loved to be able to act. The storm put them in the dark but Madge gets stabbed. Could it be the guy who told off? I wonder. Good story. Thank you for sharing.

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 Comment Written 07-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021

Thanks so much for your review and comments. There's still a lot to be resolved. I appreciate hearing from you. judi

reply by Eunice Amero on 07-Sep-2021

you are more than welcome

reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021

Thanks again. So glad you stopped by. judi