Man From My Past
A Short Love Story32 total reviews
Comment from karenina
Hmmm. This is sensual and romantic...your metaphor so obscure I feel guilty interpreting it this way! Then again... We could all use a little spark, no? Nice!
Karenina
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2021
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Hmmm. This is sensual and romantic...your metaphor so obscure I feel guilty interpreting it this way! Then again... We could all use a little spark, no? Nice!
Karenina
Comment Written 18-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2021
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Thank you for your great comments, karenina.
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You are welcome!
Karenina
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Thank YOU for the nice write!
Karenina
Comment from l.raven
Hi Amada, oh those romantic days of....wine and roses...
looking into each others eyes...as we slowly sipped
our wine...and secretly thought about the night to come...
I love your poem my sweet friend...so very nicely written...
and your picture...perfect...love you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2021
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Hi Amada, oh those romantic days of....wine and roses...
looking into each others eyes...as we slowly sipped
our wine...and secretly thought about the night to come...
I love your poem my sweet friend...so very nicely written...
and your picture...perfect...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 18-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2021
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Oh, how nice, thank you so much Linda.
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your so very welcome sweet girl...love xxoo
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2021
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This is a very well written 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 17-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2021
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Thank you, Teri.
Comment from Raul1
A very romantic poem. I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It's beautifully written. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2021
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A very romantic poem. I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It's beautifully written. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 17-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2021
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Thank you so much, Raul1.
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You're welcome!
Comment from Janet Foor
An amazing 5/7/5 poem for the contest. A real contender, I believe.
Great imagery. Terrific satori line. Made me think of the movie " The days of wine and rises".
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2021
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An amazing 5/7/5 poem for the contest. A real contender, I believe.
Great imagery. Terrific satori line. Made me think of the movie " The days of wine and rises".
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 17-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2021
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Thank you so much for your words, I needed that, today.
Comment from amahra
Beautiful artwork you chose for your writing. What can be more romantic than a glass of wine and a candle? A well-written poem and I liked the implication of the film, "Days of wine and roses.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2021
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Beautiful artwork you chose for your writing. What can be more romantic than a glass of wine and a candle? A well-written poem and I liked the implication of the film, "Days of wine and roses.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2021
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Thank you for your beautiful comments, amahara.
Comment from royowen
What an excellent work this 5/7/5 is. Writing is quite often about what isn't said in the narrative, and this is a tremendously a great example of that, well done, great post, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2021
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What an excellent work this 5/7/5 is. Writing is quite often about what isn't said in the narrative, and this is a tremendously a great example of that, well done, great post, blessings Roy
Comment Written 17-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2021
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Thank you for your beautiful comments, Roy.
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My pleasure
Comment from MAMONIA
Ah! I remember it well. The days of wine and roses were a sure thing in the beginning. Then life came, and it all drifted away.
What an excellent piece you have written here. We have all experienced it, I am sure.
The words fit the photo perfectly, and your words reflect your thoughts.
Great write.
Best of luck in the contest.
Marie
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2021
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Ah! I remember it well. The days of wine and roses were a sure thing in the beginning. Then life came, and it all drifted away.
What an excellent piece you have written here. We have all experienced it, I am sure.
The words fit the photo perfectly, and your words reflect your thoughts.
Great write.
Best of luck in the contest.
Marie
Comment Written 17-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2021
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Thank you for your beautiful comments, Marie.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of your seventeen syllables in this expressive piece about past days of romance--of needing and desiring to be needed, of indulgence.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2021
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You have made excellent use of your seventeen syllables in this expressive piece about past days of romance--of needing and desiring to be needed, of indulgence.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2021
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Thank you for reading my poem, Janice.
Comment from robyn corum
Amada,
Wow. This is a powerfully sensual piece that lingers a while. Maybe like the memories of a romance that was overwhelming but never meant to last? This is gonna be a hard one to beat, methinks. Great job!
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2021
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Amada,
Wow. This is a powerfully sensual piece that lingers a while. Maybe like the memories of a romance that was overwhelming but never meant to last? This is gonna be a hard one to beat, methinks. Great job!
Comment Written 17-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2021
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Thank you so much for supporting my work, dear friend...me thin.
