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Abram must defeat a deadly humanoid race of beings
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Comment from
royowen
What a most imaginative episode and background story you've created Amahra. The killing of the three men hasn't gone unnoticed but Ndorah deals with it well. Fancy Brehira seeing the Goddess appear to her, as the angels appeared to select Israelites, people humble who see beyond human eyes. Well done, blessings Roy
Typo : As the day (wined) down. Wound?
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Comment Written 09-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2021
Thank you, Roy. So glad you liked the chapter. Will take care of that typo.
reply by royowen on 09-Aug-2021
Comment from
barbara.wilkey
I really like this story. Thank you for sharing it with us. We now have a good idea of what is coming next.
The next morning, very early, Brehira packed the divine gifts. (The following morning... it has to deal with definition)
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Comment Written 09-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2021
Thank you, Barbara for your review.
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