Murder at the Melodrama
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Comment from royowen
So Lou Likens, the erstwhile Deputy is carrying the routine questioning of those that had come in contact with Mr Patterson, (it's a pity you don't have someone like the redoubtable Miss Marples) an excellent script, well written and longer than your normal scripts...I think. Well done, Judy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021
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So Lou Likens, the erstwhile Deputy is carrying the routine questioning of those that had come in contact with Mr Patterson, (it's a pity you don't have someone like the redoubtable Miss Marples) an excellent script, well written and longer than your normal scripts...I think. Well done, Judy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 17-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021
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Thanks so much for your review and comments. I loved the Miss Marple novels. Of course we have our own sleuth in Jessica Fletcher of "Murder, She Wrote." We've been watching that on DVD recently. judi
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Another busy body, heh heh.
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Jessica Fletcher of "Murder She Wrote" was a busybody. judi
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My youngest daughter made that observation, heh heh
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I very much enjoyed reading this. Sorry I am out of sixes. I only noticed one letter missing, in the beginning: begin questioning thos
I think you mean 'those' and that's all I saw. This is every bit as professional-sounding as a "Murder, She Wrote" online game I have been investigating.
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I very much enjoyed reading this. Sorry I am out of sixes. I only noticed one letter missing, in the beginning: begin questioning thos
I think you mean 'those' and that's all I saw. This is every bit as professional-sounding as a "Murder, She Wrote" online game I have been investigating.
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Comment Written 17-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021
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Thanks so much for your review and comments. I loved the "Murder, She Wrote" TV series, and we've been watching it on DVD. I didn't know about the online game. I'll have to check that out. judi
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
What a twist! Sounds to me like it could have been an accident--tripped and hit his head? Do they know the cause of death/method of murder yet. I'm on the hook!
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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021
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What a twist! Sounds to me like it could have been an accident--tripped and hit his head? Do they know the cause of death/method of murder yet. I'm on the hook!
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Comment Written 17-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021
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Thanks so much for your review and comments. The Sheriff will have finished his inspection of the crime scene and will be back soon. We'll hear more from him soon. You are amazing the way you get in so many reviews every day. I'm always behind. judi
