Comment from royowen

Excellent

Everyone has established their alibis, except Don really, but he says was in his shop, whether he has a witness or not is not sure. But an excellent post Judy, these can't be easy, they seem difficult to write. Well done, blessings Roy
Gale : Whe(n) I spoke to him...

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2021

Thanks so much for your review and comments. In a mystery, those alibis are often pretty shaky, so we'll see what develops. judi

reply by royowen on 03-Jul-2021

Well done

reply by the author on 03-Jul-2021

Thanks for the encouraging words. judi

reply by royowen on 03-Jul-2021

Well done

Comment from Elizabeth Emerald

Excellent

Well crafted scene! The characters and dialog ring true--I'm intrigued to see how this develops. No suspects yet!

Poor Harvey Patterson was out=>OUR first guest.

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2021

Thanks so much for your review and comments. I'll be getting into what's behind the murder in scenes to come. Have a great Fourth of July. judi

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

Hmm, I think this well written but may go too far off the reservation for normal conversation under the circumstances. I kept waiting for at least one person to actually go out and see the body or behave properly shocked at a murder but that doesn't happen.

This is a satirical murder mystery, like Clue, right?

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 Comment Written 02-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2021

Thanks so much for your review and comments. Yes, I'm aiming for a comedy mystery. There's always work for the director and actors to have them react in a scene. Have a great Fourth of July. judi

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

I'm enjoying the story. Everyone seem to be getting their alibis in order. I don't see any motive for any of this group to have killed him yet, but I guess we'll soon know more.

Whe I spoke to himb (missing an "n")

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 Comment Written 02-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2021

Thanks so much for your review and comments. Yes, maybe the sheriff will grill them. judi