Comment from LisaMay

Excellent

I've never seen a raccoon but you describe this critter's actions so well I feel like i know her. Your poem is jaunty and real - taking a bite of 5-day old food that smells like shit really cracked me up (like a bad egg)!

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reply by the author on 12-May-2021

Thanks so much for taking time to read and review this. I'm glad you liked it.

Comment from Leann DS

Excellent

This was a funny poem with a limerick-like rhyme scheme . I like the way it flowed, and I enjoyed the unique rhyme pattern. The story was also cute! :-) Thank you for sharing and good luck to you in the contest.

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reply by the author on 12-May-2021

Thank you so much! I appreciate it!

Comment from Audra J Perez

Exceptional

im loving the picture, anyways this is the cutest little poem no feedback, all raccoon poems are superior, keep writing you're doing absolutely amazing!!

 Comment Written 12-May-2021

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reply by the author on 12-May-2021

Aw. thank you so much for the exceptional rating and the supportive feedback. I sincerely appreciate it.

Have a great evening.

Comment from country ranch writer

Exceptional

I love this this raccoons are great to watch with there inquisitive young.we have spent a it of time sitting our back in our rocking chairs watching them come and go.

 Comment Written 12-May-2021

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reply by the author on 12-May-2021

Hello! Thank you so much for taking time to read and review my work. I appreciate the feedback and the lovely six stars.

Have a great evening.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

You brought the antics of this Racoon to life here as he fights for his family and hunts for food, we don't have them here and it is good to hear about the wild life in your country, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 12-May-2021

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reply by the author on 12-May-2021

Hello! Consider yourself lucky you don't have to deal with raccoons. They are cute, but they are sooooo naughty. And the have little hands with thumbs, so they can get into everything. It's awful.

Thanks for taking time to read and review. I appreciate it!

Comment from Dilettante junior

Excellent

Yay! What a nice little poem. I love this raccoon! The verses are impeccable and flow well. Your description is crisp and delightful to read. She is very witty indeed!
I enjoyed this very much.
Bravo!
DJ

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 Comment Written 11-May-2021

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reply by the author on 12-May-2021

Hahaha, thank you for reading and taking time to review. Glad you enjoyed it.

Cheers!