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Geoffrey's Musings.

Viewing comments for Chapter 76 "Change"
A book of Stories, Essays and Poetry.

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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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You did a good job with your informative poem. I enjoyed reading it. I get the idea that things have changed, but not always for the better. You miss your 'troop' and the ones who now are helping are not the same before covid. Your lines flow smoothly with good rhymes and great imagery. I could see everything you mentioned.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2021
    Thanks, Jan. I was stuck in writer's block. I did an earlier version of this poem but it got lost somehow. This one has much more detail than the original. Our two original drivers are gone. One has gone back to Pakistan to visit his Mum he has not seen for ages dues to COVID. He is the one that took on Ahmad(Bakaart) who we were so glad to meet all those years ago. If you had not read that chapter in my biography I pointed to it says a lot more about meeting Ahmad and "Junior" Shahid. Reason for the nickname is every second Paki is called Shahid hehe. I know I have not been by your stuff in a while and this poem has generated a whole bunch of new folks to check out! Sigh! Thanks again.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
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So many businesses have been affected by Covid 19, that it does not come as a surprise to read about the Taxi business. I for one, used it a lot but have not ordered a taxi since the first lockdown mostly because one could not be sure who last occupied the back seat.
I can see what you are saying here, quite clearly.

Ralf


 Comment Written 18-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2021
    You make a good point about who has been in the taxi. Here in Australia I think they do a sort of clean after each fare. Another new friend I have to check out. I had another version of this I lost. This one has a lot more to it. Thanks for coming by.
Comment from Ulla
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Hi Geoff, this is a great poem depicting the services that used to be available to you and your needs. The minute the Government takes over things starts to deteriorate.Why does that sound familiar? It's good to see you posting. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2021
    Hi Ulla, I had another version of this but I lost it. This one has a lot more in it. We are just glad the Government came in on this as it has made some others wake up to the fact they don't have a monopoly on services. Thanks for coming by.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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Your poem is excellent in every respect--well put-together and timely, conveying a powerful message about how Covid has played hacvoc with businesses and those who use them. Post-Covid?? (It's not over.)

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2021
    You are right of course. Things have improved here in Australia but now one of the Vaccinations is causing problems with clotting for some and they are dying. I know it is n it over and will it ever be? Thanks for coming by and the lovely review. I had another version of this I lost this one is more detailed.
Comment from lyenochka
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Thanks for the update in poetry form, Geoffrey. Hope you and Louise are staying safe and can get the rides you need. Covid has definitely made things hard for drivers everywhere.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2021
    Thanks for the lovely review. As another friend pointed out it has also wreaked havoc with a lot of relationships.
reply by lyenochka on 18-Apr-2021
    So sad!
Comment from juliaSjames
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Hope you and your wife are finding adequate transportation to meet your needs Geoff. From your author notes it seems you have options. Always a good thing.

The poem shows a positive attitude in the face of frustrations. Well written.

Stay safe blessed and as healthy as possible.

Julia

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2021
    Thanks Julia. I think I said I had another version of this poem but I lost it. Hope it turns up. This version has a lot more "meat" in it though!
Comment from Mastery
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Good day, Mate. So you have choices then? Sounds like, if you "take flight" you can get the same service and better elsewhere. That's a great option as long as it is available. Days change all things, right? Bless you, Bob

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2021
    Thanks Bob. Been stuck in writer's Block. I did have another version of this I lost. This one is a lot more detailed though. Another ramble coming.
reply by Mastery on 18-Apr-2021
    okee dokee Geoff. Bob
Comment from Dilettante junior
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Nice job with your work. The words flow well. A real tragedy how covid affected all sorts of businesses. The stark reality of the moment which got many people struggling. Well done!

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2021
    Thanks new friend. A whole lot of new friends I need to look at and you are just one more. Thanks for the great review. I had another version of this I lost. This one is a lot more detailed.
Comment from Sherry Asbury
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I am a recluse - thank goodness because of the times I have needed public transport - it was woefully lacking. Oh well, today is Truth Day - I prefer the quiet and safety of my room. Too much noise and rudeness out there.
You have hit the mark on the "make the reader see who you are" scale. Well-written and smooth...

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2021
    Thanks Sherry, I don't think we have met before. So many new friends I need to check. There was another version of this I lost. This one is much more detailed. See you around.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I honestly believe one the government gets involved in something it suddenly gets all screwed up. Thank you for sharing and I enjoyed reading your lovely poem. Keep them coming.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2021
    Hi Sis I got stuck in writer's block. I had another version of this I lost. This one is a lot more detailed. At east the Government's new option has given the others a wake up call. Thanks.