Comment from royowen

Excellent

Yes, spiders are cunningly and incredibly well equipped to trap their prey, they are likewise very useful, we would be overrun by the insects of the world, if they weren't consigned to consume 80% of all pests, a beautifully written 3 line poem. Good luck, blessings Roy
Suggestion : Spun in mysterious way(s)

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 Comment Written 10-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021

Roy,

Multi thanks for your review and edit suggestion. You are correct, it is much better as a plural. And yes, we do need those spiders to combat our pest population. Do you think we could hire them out to take care of our pollution problem too? LOL

re pollution - you may be interested in how Amsterdam is trying to reduce the plastic pollution problem

Google: First Bubble Barrier stops plastic from Amsterdamīs canals

Mark

reply by royowen on 11-Jun-2021

I?ll have a look.

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

This is very artistically penned and illustrated in abstract art. The black and white is very mysterious. I keep waiting for it to go "Gotcha!" Sending you my best today as always,
Sal :))

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 Comment Written 10-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021

Sally,

Thanks for your review and stars. Pleased my black and white motif agrees with you!

Mark