Ode to FanStory Friends
Amphibrach meter28 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Thank you for all your contributions to our Fanstory experience, Melissa. I totally agree with you. Just as you said, "for where else can I suggest changes ~ or not." Here we can interact with the author as we read!
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Thank you for all your contributions to our Fanstory experience, Melissa. I totally agree with you. Just as you said, "for where else can I suggest changes ~ or not." Here we can interact with the author as we read!
Comment Written 24-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Hello Helen. I am so glad you liked this Ode. It is heartfelt to all... and especially you!!
Melissa
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Hello Helen. I am so glad you liked this Ode. It is heartfelt to all... and especially you!!
Melissa
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Hello Helen. I am so glad you liked this Ode. It is heartfelt to all... and especially you!!
Melissa
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I'm so honored! Thank you!! 💖💖
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Hello Helen. I am so glad you liked this Ode. It is heartfelt to all... and especially you!!
Melissa
Comment from June Sargent
This is such a fun read and a positive take on what Fanstory is supposed to be. It is a means for self improvement in our craft, as well as a way to communicate with people all over the world. You are great example of someone who takes her writing seriously - have have grown. Thanks for this bit of inspiration.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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This is such a fun read and a positive take on what Fanstory is supposed to be. It is a means for self improvement in our craft, as well as a way to communicate with people all over the world. You are great example of someone who takes her writing seriously - have have grown. Thanks for this bit of inspiration.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Thank you June. I am so glad you liked this Ode. I really appreciate the encouraging words!! Hugs!
Melissa
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Thank you June. I am so glad you liked this Ode. I really appreciate the encouraging words!! Hugs!
Melissa
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Thank you June. I am so glad you liked this Ode. I really appreciate the encouraging words!! Hugs!
Melissa
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Thank you June. I am so glad you liked this Ode. I really appreciate the encouraging words!! Hugs!
Melissa
Comment from royowen
A very kind and generous accolade for your fanstory buddies here on this salubrious sight. And displaying the eloquence of a well developed and seasoned wordsmith. You have developed beautifully before our very eyes, yes indeed, this site has helped one and all, this post is a good example of that, well done Melissa,
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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A very kind and generous accolade for your fanstory buddies here on this salubrious sight. And displaying the eloquence of a well developed and seasoned wordsmith. You have developed beautifully before our very eyes, yes indeed, this site has helped one and all, this post is a good example of that, well done Melissa,
Comment Written 24-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Hugs Roy!! Thank you for that wonderfully encouraging response to the Ode. You have long been a poet that I have respected and admired! Thanks again!
Melissa
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Well done, bless you
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello Melissa, what a lovely poem and your meter is such that it is a pleasure to read. I bounced along (metaphorically) to the great rhythm.
Amphibrach meter I have not even heard of - maybe I should give it a try. It works well and here you have written a good, very kind ode to Fanstory friends. Strange, none of us are likely to ever meet but we feel we get to know one another, simply through out writing. I enjoyed your poem - keep writing - regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Hello Melissa, what a lovely poem and your meter is such that it is a pleasure to read. I bounced along (metaphorically) to the great rhythm.
Amphibrach meter I have not even heard of - maybe I should give it a try. It works well and here you have written a good, very kind ode to Fanstory friends. Strange, none of us are likely to ever meet but we feel we get to know one another, simply through out writing. I enjoyed your poem - keep writing - regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 24-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Hello Dorothy. Thank you for your wonderful comments. I do feel like I know so many wonderful writers and poets because of the camaraderie we all share. It is a wonderful hobby to share :)
Melissa
Comment from damommy
Lovely tribute to all your FS story friends. You did a great job on the amphibrach meter. It reads very smoothly. Glad to know it's not a farewell piece. 8-)
(Jim's not Welsh, he's English.)
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Lovely tribute to all your FS story friends. You did a great job on the amphibrach meter. It reads very smoothly. Glad to know it's not a farewell piece. 8-)
(Jim's not Welsh, he's English.)
Comment Written 24-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Thanks Yvonne. Yes, I know he is English, but Welsh fit better. I have heard from him and received my correction!! LOL. So glad you liked the verse.
Melissa
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written poem. It has a great flow and rhyme scheme. I really enjoy your writing. With sincere devotion, I send you warm greetings that carry best wishes big hugs and big smiles. So nice. Awesome photo ð???
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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This is a beautifully written poem. It has a great flow and rhyme scheme. I really enjoy your writing. With sincere devotion, I send you warm greetings that carry best wishes big hugs and big smiles. So nice. Awesome photo ð???
Comment Written 24-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Hi Joanne. Thanks for the lovely comments. I sincerely love my FS friends... of course, that means you too ;), and they have helped me to improve so much since I joined in 2017. I had not written a poem before joining.
Melissa
Comment from Janice Canerdy
I love anapestic meter done right, and yours certainly is. Your poem is very skillfully written and vividly descriptive of your appreciation for Fan Story members and for the opportuities offered.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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I love anapestic meter done right, and yours certainly is. Your poem is very skillfully written and vividly descriptive of your appreciation for Fan Story members and for the opportuities offered.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Hi Janice. Thank you! I always value your insight into my verses and hope we are both around for may more years to enjoy all that FS offers!
Melissa
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Comment from judiverse
That is so sweet! I must say that I appreciate that you didn't name names. I've known writers to do that and in some cases it seems to indicate playing favorites. It's amazing how such a close association can be formed
even among people who live so far apart. I enjoyed the rhythm in this. It moves along smoothly and is cheerful. Perfect last line. That's what we wish for our FS friends. judi
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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That is so sweet! I must say that I appreciate that you didn't name names. I've known writers to do that and in some cases it seems to indicate playing favorites. It's amazing how such a close association can be formed
even among people who live so far apart. I enjoyed the rhythm in this. It moves along smoothly and is cheerful. Perfect last line. That's what we wish for our FS friends. judi
Comment Written 24-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Hi Judi. Thanks.. you were my first friend here on FS... the first one to follow me back in 2017. I always look forward to reading your work and also your reviews. Thanks so much!
Melissa
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You're welcome. The time goes quickly, doesn't it? Thanks for the lovely comments, and it's been a pleasure reading your poems. judi
Comment from Pantygynt
I am so pleased to see you writing in amphibrach metre. It is so good for this lighter type of work. The even numbered catalectic lines bring the rhythm to a logical conclusion for English speakers.
I have removed the paragraph about line 16 as a result of your correction to it. It is fine now.
I thought I would have a go just to see if I could still do it.
And one other mention I must make, Melissa;
I am not a Welshman, though living in Wales
for I was born English in fair Worcester city
and that's pronounced 'Wooster' for 'War-sess-ter' fails.
I came for employment. My job brought me hither,
way back in the year of nineteen ninety-four,
and when made redundant decided to stay here
where unemployment's understood more and more.
They closed all the coal mines and Japanese fact'ries.
They've shut down the steel works. They even closed Ford,
where folk manufactured those motor car engines.
Welsh chapels lie empty of prayers to Our Lord
Though Wales is depressed now with much unemployment
this land of song silenced, the choirs can't meet,
We can't keep a welcome, for lockdown restrictions
closed valleys and hillsides beyond our home street.
The same thing has happened in England and Scotland,
the Irish have locked down, each lad and colleen.
But is this the way to keep Irish eyes smiling
through hell and high water and Covid Nineteen?
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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I am so pleased to see you writing in amphibrach metre. It is so good for this lighter type of work. The even numbered catalectic lines bring the rhythm to a logical conclusion for English speakers.
I have removed the paragraph about line 16 as a result of your correction to it. It is fine now.
I thought I would have a go just to see if I could still do it.
And one other mention I must make, Melissa;
I am not a Welshman, though living in Wales
for I was born English in fair Worcester city
and that's pronounced 'Wooster' for 'War-sess-ter' fails.
I came for employment. My job brought me hither,
way back in the year of nineteen ninety-four,
and when made redundant decided to stay here
where unemployment's understood more and more.
They closed all the coal mines and Japanese fact'ries.
They've shut down the steel works. They even closed Ford,
where folk manufactured those motor car engines.
Welsh chapels lie empty of prayers to Our Lord
Though Wales is depressed now with much unemployment
this land of song silenced, the choirs can't meet,
We can't keep a welcome, for lockdown restrictions
closed valleys and hillsides beyond our home street.
The same thing has happened in England and Scotland,
the Irish have locked down, each lad and colleen.
But is this the way to keep Irish eyes smiling
through hell and high water and Covid Nineteen?
Comment Written 24-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Wow!! What a wonderful verse and you nailed the amphibrach meter. I changed the line that had too many syllables... thanks for mentioning it. Wish you would post this verse!! It would help encourage others to write in amphibrach meter too.;). Thanks so much Jim!!
Melissa
Comment from 4theloveoftrees
Lovely sentiments, Melissa! It is wonderful to be able to express ourselves here in friendship and with fellow admirers of the written word! It has helped me to strive to write more and expand my knowledge. If only I had more time. ;)
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Lovely sentiments, Melissa! It is wonderful to be able to express ourselves here in friendship and with fellow admirers of the written word! It has helped me to strive to write more and expand my knowledge. If only I had more time. ;)
Comment Written 24-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Hello Pat. I know what you mean... there is not enough time in the day! So glad you enjoyed the Ode!! Thank you.
Melissa