Old Love
3 Line Poetry23 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
You met the challenges of this three line poem contest well. You bring in the beauty of the garden and the romance of "old love" with the beloved's kisses. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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You met the challenges of this three line poem contest well. You bring in the beauty of the garden and the romance of "old love" with the beloved's kisses. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 21-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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Hello Helen. Thank you for your lovely review. I cannot wait to see the gardens in bloom again!!
Melissa
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a Nicely written three line poem. Warm twilight breezes are redolent with old love. Beautiful
Vibrant photo choice to compliment your poem. Nicely done . Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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This is a Nicely written three line poem. Warm twilight breezes are redolent with old love. Beautiful
Vibrant photo choice to compliment your poem. Nicely done . Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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Hello Joanne. Thank you.... I am sooo in the mood for springtime that I continue to write about it. LOL
Melissa
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello Melissa, this is beautiful and fulfils the demands of the 5/7/7 poem with a love story flavour. Well worded with a glorious picture display. I particularly like the sweet touch - OLD LOVE.
Good entry - good luck. Warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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Hello Melissa, this is beautiful and fulfils the demands of the 5/7/7 poem with a love story flavour. Well worded with a glorious picture display. I particularly like the sweet touch - OLD LOVE.
Good entry - good luck. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 21-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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Hi Dorothy. Thank you for our wonderful review of Old Love. I so appreciate your thoughts on it.
Melissa
Comment from Mistydawn
What a gorgeous garden, all the bright, colorful flowers and smells of them all in the gentle breeze. How their heavenly fragrance romances you like your lover's sweet kiss. Good luck with your contest.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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What a gorgeous garden, all the bright, colorful flowers and smells of them all in the gentle breeze. How their heavenly fragrance romances you like your lover's sweet kiss. Good luck with your contest.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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Thank you Misty. I love gardens and cannot wait for springtime!!
Melissa
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Thank you Misty. I love gardens and cannot wait for springtime!!
Melissa
Comment from Debbie Pope
This is lovely, Melissa. I bet it makes the leaderboard. Your word choices are moving. I like your "old love." It clearly lives on in your garden. The scents of your happy young kisses live on in the twilight breezes of your garden. They will live forever. How romantic!
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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This is lovely, Melissa. I bet it makes the leaderboard. Your word choices are moving. I like your "old love." It clearly lives on in your garden. The scents of your happy young kisses live on in the twilight breezes of your garden. They will live forever. How romantic!
Comment Written 21-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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Thank you Debbie for your lovely and insightful review. Hugs!!
Melissa
Comment from Mark D. R.
Melissa,
You created a delightful scene (in verse and with photo) that I wish came soon! Yes, the light breeze and kisses may warm the cheeks of those in the autumn of their years. LOL
Best wishes for the contest voting.
Mark
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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Melissa,
You created a delightful scene (in verse and with photo) that I wish came soon! Yes, the light breeze and kisses may warm the cheeks of those in the autumn of their years. LOL
Best wishes for the contest voting.
Mark
Comment Written 21-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much, Mark!!
Melissa
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Melissa,
I like this poem because the images of a beautiful garden and twilight love are very beautiful to me. Love that's been tested is stronger and just as exciting as young love.
Excellent poem.
Good luck in the contest.
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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Melissa,
I like this poem because the images of a beautiful garden and twilight love are very beautiful to me. Love that's been tested is stronger and just as exciting as young love.
Excellent poem.
Good luck in the contest.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 21-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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Glad you like this one, Cindy. I will pick old love any day of the week!!!
Melissa
Comment from royowen
A few have thought that this 3 Line contest was 5/7/5 but it's 5/7/7 Melissa, just letting you know, otherwise it may (or will) be disqualified. Thought it was too good to let slip, dear girl. Well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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A few have thought that this 3 Line contest was 5/7/5 but it's 5/7/7 Melissa, just letting you know, otherwise it may (or will) be disqualified. Thought it was too good to let slip, dear girl. Well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 21-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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Thanks so very much, Roy!! I will go add some syllables! Glad you let me know. :)
Melissa
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Most welcome
Comment from 4theloveoftrees
A lovely offering for the 3-line poem contest. I particularly enjoyed "redolent with old love" to describe a sweet-smelling garden made up of old growth faithfully cared for. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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A lovely offering for the 3-line poem contest. I particularly enjoyed "redolent with old love" to describe a sweet-smelling garden made up of old growth faithfully cared for. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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Thank you Pat. So appreciate your comments.
Melissa
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Roses represent love old and new and you brought some sweet scent to
my senses here. A fine presentation, gorgeous roses evoke words from
seasoned poets, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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Roses represent love old and new and you brought some sweet scent to
my senses here. A fine presentation, gorgeous roses evoke words from
seasoned poets, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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Thank you Dolly. Much appreciated, my friend.
Melissa