Prayer for the Times
And for the people living through them...23 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A good use of 30 syllables here with fine rhyming and sentiment, a pleasing and meaningful poem that touched my heart, much enjoyed and a winner for me, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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A good use of 30 syllables here with fine rhyming and sentiment, a pleasing and meaningful poem that touched my heart, much enjoyed and a winner for me, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your encouraging review, Dolly - we all need some serenity these days, don't we? Happy Weekend!!
Comment from equestrik
This writing is incredibly beautiful-from the visual to the rhythm to the flow and your words. This is a beautiful presentation. Best to you in the upcoming contest.
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This writing is incredibly beautiful-from the visual to the rhythm to the flow and your words. This is a beautiful presentation. Best to you in the upcoming contest.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Oh, my goodness - THANK YOU for both your encouraging review and those awesome stars! I am so very glad this one touched you... we all need some serenity these days, don't we? May you find some this weekend...
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello anonymous
I love your entry for the
30 Syllables writing prompt contest.
Great job with the form. Beautiful imagery and presentation. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice presentation too. Good luck in the contest. You are my choice in the contest so far.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Hello anonymous
I love your entry for the
30 Syllables writing prompt contest.
Great job with the form. Beautiful imagery and presentation. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice presentation too. Good luck in the contest. You are my choice in the contest so far.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your encouraging review, Gypsy - Happy Weekend!!
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written 30 syllable poem.I Like this part. And cleansing rain bring peace again flooding hearts with needed smiles. Beautiful photo. Good luck in the contest.
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This is a beautifully written 30 syllable poem.I Like this part. And cleansing rain bring peace again flooding hearts with needed smiles. Beautiful photo. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your encouraging review, Joanne - Happy Weekend!!
Comment from Boogienights
This is so nice, I love the message and it's much needed right now. A lovely picture to accompany it. I think it will do well in the contest. Thanks for sharing and best of luck.
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This is so nice, I love the message and it's much needed right now. A lovely picture to accompany it. I think it will do well in the contest. Thanks for sharing and best of luck.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your encouraging review, Boogienights - Happy Weekend!!
Comment from June Sargent
Just beautiful! May cleansing rain bring peace again - it's what we all want, it's what the world needs right now. Let the April showers begin so we can see hope bloom again...
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Just beautiful! May cleansing rain bring peace again - it's what we all want, it's what the world needs right now. Let the April showers begin so we can see hope bloom again...
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Indeed! Thank you for your encouraging review, June - Happy Weekend!!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written thirty syllable poem/prayer to encourage us all through this trying times to stay calm and peaceful despite the chaos around us and never losing hope.
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A very well-written thirty syllable poem/prayer to encourage us all through this trying times to stay calm and peaceful despite the chaos around us and never losing hope.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your encouraging review, Sandra - Happy Weekend!!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I love your offering for the contest restoring balance in nature and in life: "cleansing rain
bring peace again...
flooding hearts with needed smiles!
" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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I love your offering for the contest restoring balance in nature and in life: "cleansing rain
bring peace again...
flooding hearts with needed smiles!
" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your encouraging review, Iza - Happy Weekend!!
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Heartfelt and elegant--you made wise use of titles to complement the theme--lovely and graceful--excellent rhyme scheme.
Sugg: to CYA for contest--cite source re trials=2 syllables, some say only one.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Heartfelt and elegant--you made wise use of titles to complement the theme--lovely and graceful--excellent rhyme scheme.
Sugg: to CYA for contest--cite source re trials=2 syllables, some say only one.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Good idea! Thank you for your encouraging review, Liz - Happy Weekend!!
Comment from QC Poet
Very beautiful and 30 syllable compliant poem with great message and lovely picture. Love how you blended it with winter scene wording. Best of Luck in the Contest.
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Very beautiful and 30 syllable compliant poem with great message and lovely picture. Love how you blended it with winter scene wording. Best of Luck in the Contest.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your encouraging review, QC - Happy Weekend!!
