America - Forever Beautiful
Lady Liberty. Old Glory and Us13 total reviews
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I think your captured very well the so-called American dream: "A shocked world watched as democracy was trampled. Our enemies cheered. Americans stood in disbelief.
Lady Liberty hung her head in shame. Old Glory, tattered and torn, refused to step aside." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2021
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I think your captured very well the so-called American dream: "A shocked world watched as democracy was trampled. Our enemies cheered. Americans stood in disbelief.
Lady Liberty hung her head in shame. Old Glory, tattered and torn, refused to step aside." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2021
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No one person can do this alone and it calls for unity of all. If we are to become a better nation we must appreciate everyone who is an American and pull together. Yes, I believe success is found when God is at the helm. Thank you!
Comment from Goodadvicechan
This a good poem. I like what you said , "America, built by immigrants, believes in our rights of Life, Liberty, Pursuit of Happiness, and Justice for all men, women, and children. We are created equal., "
Today, a proud America called for unity and new beginnings.Together, our America is still beautiful.
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This a good poem. I like what you said , "America, built by immigrants, believes in our rights of Life, Liberty, Pursuit of Happiness, and Justice for all men, women, and children. We are created equal., "
Today, a proud America called for unity and new beginnings.Together, our America is still beautiful.
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Comment Written 20-Jan-2021
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No one person can do this alone and it calls for unity of all. If we are to become a better nation we must appreciate everyone who is an American and pull together. Yes, I believe success is found when God is at the helm. Thank you!
Comment from lancellot
It is not political and it is more commentary than a story. It is fiction, most of it. I will not debate your POV or version of American history, recent or past.
I wish you luck in the contest
Hundreds of rioters stormed the {hallowed} halls of our Capitol with the intention of destruction and treasonous acts.
-When did this happen?
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It is not political and it is more commentary than a story. It is fiction, most of it. I will not debate your POV or version of American history, recent or past.
I wish you luck in the contest
Hundreds of rioters stormed the {hallowed} halls of our Capitol with the intention of destruction and treasonous acts.
-When did this happen?
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Comment Written 20-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2021
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thank you....That's what makes America great; we are all entitled to our viewpoints. My objective was to remind people that its a new day and we can all stand together for democracy (regardless of our beliefs).