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Home is where your life unfolds.89 total reviews
Comment from Gloria ....
Hey Linda. Great to see you and with a fine poem too. You had me at, home is where you find your umbrella on a rainy day. That sets the tone beautifully.
A few lines of great wit in memories, of threatening your daughter's boyfriend and jelly prints on grandma's walls all add to a most image filled and personal memoir of some great times.
A most enjoyable read today. :)
Gloria
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Hey Linda. Great to see you and with a fine poem too. You had me at, home is where you find your umbrella on a rainy day. That sets the tone beautifully.
A few lines of great wit in memories, of threatening your daughter's boyfriend and jelly prints on grandma's walls all add to a most image filled and personal memoir of some great times.
A most enjoyable read today. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
Comment from QC Poet
Oddly enough I sheltered in place since March 2020 (still do) but in December both My Wife and I had to go to Emergency and Got the New Experimental Intravenous Drip Medications for Covid 19 due to testing positive. I think one of my Grown Kids my have gotten it at his Job. We have Our 6 bedroom home and My Grown Sons Are my Joint Owners and we also have 4 grandkids in home.
Thanks for Sharing your Poem. Blessings
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Oddly enough I sheltered in place since March 2020 (still do) but in December both My Wife and I had to go to Emergency and Got the New Experimental Intravenous Drip Medications for Covid 19 due to testing positive. I think one of my Grown Kids my have gotten it at his Job. We have Our 6 bedroom home and My Grown Sons Are my Joint Owners and we also have 4 grandkids in home.
Thanks for Sharing your Poem. Blessings
Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
Comment from BrooklynnPreston
This is so beautiful and I love how you go through different ages, different stages in life, all happening in the same home throughout your poem. Well done with your writing and I see no errors. God Bless.
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This is so beautiful and I love how you go through different ages, different stages in life, all happening in the same home throughout your poem. Well done with your writing and I see no errors. God Bless.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a Beautifully written poem about home. Sums up perfectly there's no place like home. Home is where your children take their first steps say their first words ride their first bikes. So true. Very nicely done.
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This is a Beautifully written poem about home. Sums up perfectly there's no place like home. Home is where your children take their first steps say their first words ride their first bikes. So true. Very nicely done.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
Comment from Michele Harber
What a beautiful attitude, and one which I agree with wholeheartedly. Home is family, home is comfort, home is security but, most importantly, home is yours, and it's the one place you can always return to that will welcome you with open arms.
You've expressed this genuinely and honestly, and in a way that's very relatable. Tracing what home means through various stages in life gives your poem extra meaning. I enjoyed this very much.
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What a beautiful attitude, and one which I agree with wholeheartedly. Home is family, home is comfort, home is security but, most importantly, home is yours, and it's the one place you can always return to that will welcome you with open arms.
You've expressed this genuinely and honestly, and in a way that's very relatable. Tracing what home means through various stages in life gives your poem extra meaning. I enjoyed this very much.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
Comment from Mary Vigasin
There is a warmth in your words about home in every stage of life. It is a beautiful poem that reminds one that home is your safest harbor. Even as one ages, going home is always the goal.
Well done and a joy to read, well done rhyming and repeating to remind us of home.
Regards,
Mary
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There is a warmth in your words about home in every stage of life. It is a beautiful poem that reminds one that home is your safest harbor. Even as one ages, going home is always the goal.
Well done and a joy to read, well done rhyming and repeating to remind us of home.
Regards,
Mary
Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
Comment from JLR
Linda, your graphic evokes being carried to a safe haven, home. Good success in the forthcoming contest. Thank you for sharing your work. Good Success on this and all work throughout the coming year.
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Linda, your graphic evokes being carried to a safe haven, home. Good success in the forthcoming contest. Thank you for sharing your work. Good Success on this and all work throughout the coming year.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
Comment from RGstar
Nicely done. Good to see you are still here. Hope all is well.
Everything summed up in your poem that constitutes the emotions in life, especially the meaningful ones. Well done,
My very best wishes.
RGstar
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2021
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Nicely done. Good to see you are still here. Hope all is well.
Everything summed up in your poem that constitutes the emotions in life, especially the meaningful ones. Well done,
My very best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2021
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Hey RGstar! Any compliment coming from you is worth a zillion dollars. I admire and respect the quality of your words. Keep safe. Linda
Comment from Jeffrey Ford
Hello, I think that you wrote an amazing poem! It is very engaging. and it had me hooked from the beginning of it! My favorite line is "home is where your children take their first steps say their first words ride their first bikes" That line is so relatable because I can remember as a child learning to ride my first bike with training wheels. This is a great poem! Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2021
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Hello, I think that you wrote an amazing poem! It is very engaging. and it had me hooked from the beginning of it! My favorite line is "home is where your children take their first steps say their first words ride their first bikes" That line is so relatable because I can remember as a child learning to ride my first bike with training wheels. This is a great poem! Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2021
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Thank you for reading and commenting. I appreciate your kind words. Linda
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
The many experiences and nuances that are present as the years go by, do indeed happen at 'home'. So your poem is so on the mark when it lists all the steps we take and watch. A very thoughtful depiction of our life.
Ralf
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2021
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The many experiences and nuances that are present as the years go by, do indeed happen at 'home'. So your poem is so on the mark when it lists all the steps we take and watch. A very thoughtful depiction of our life.
Ralf
Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2021
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Thank you, Raffaelina, for reading and for your kind words. Linda