Seven Little Kitties
Mischief in the kitchen28 total reviews
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is a cute and very sweet rhyming poem which is an excellent entry for the contest, since it is geared towards children. The picture is adorable. I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021
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This is a cute and very sweet rhyming poem which is an excellent entry for the contest, since it is geared towards children. The picture is adorable. I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021
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Thabk you for such a positive review :)
Comment from lancellot
It is a nice and very simple rhyming poem. I can see this working for very young children, maybe preschool. Any older and they will wonder about the countdown of Kitties, considering that most didn't actually leave.
Good entry.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021
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It is a nice and very simple rhyming poem. I can see this working for very young children, maybe preschool. Any older and they will wonder about the countdown of Kitties, considering that most didn't actually leave.
Good entry.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021
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They all went out to play except the responsible one..lol. Thanks for the nice review. :)
Comment from Pantygynt
And no kitties were harmed in the making of this poem. We can see that since all seven were united at the end for the feast. I bet your version of Hansel and Gretel has the witch extricating herself from the oven as a repentant do-gooder!
Kids will love the rhymes and the clicking consonance in this.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021
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And no kitties were harmed in the making of this poem. We can see that since all seven were united at the end for the feast. I bet your version of Hansel and Gretel has the witch extricating herself from the oven as a repentant do-gooder!
Kids will love the rhymes and the clicking consonance in this.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021
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That's a great idea! I love happy endings so maybe the witch COULD be nice...lol. I think you're on to something. Thanks for this great review. :)
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are sweet, delightful and creative. I enjoyed the read
of this poem. The poem flows and connects well. I found the theme of
this poem a fun poem for all ages. The artwork is perfect and compliments these words.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2021
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The author's words are sweet, delightful and creative. I enjoyed the read
of this poem. The poem flows and connects well. I found the theme of
this poem a fun poem for all ages. The artwork is perfect and compliments these words.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your nice comments, I appreciate you reading my poem. :)
Comment from Susan Larson
This is a cute variation of five little monkeys. I could just imagine, when I was a pre school teacher, reading this aloud to my kids and hearing them giggle. Then in time I'd have them complete the rhyme. Very cute.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2021
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This is a cute variation of five little monkeys. I could just imagine, when I was a pre school teacher, reading this aloud to my kids and hearing them giggle. Then in time I'd have them complete the rhyme. Very cute.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2021
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Thank you for this nice review, I'm so glad you liked it. :)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem for children. Many activities start with great enthusiasm and all join in the fun, but soon one by one they drop out until only one is left to finish the task and invited her friends to enjoy the end results with her.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2021
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A very well-written poem for children. Many activities start with great enthusiasm and all join in the fun, but soon one by one they drop out until only one is left to finish the task and invited her friends to enjoy the end results with her.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2021
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Isn't that just the Way? Don't contribute but reap the benefits...oh well...lol. Thanks for reading. :)
Comment from Susan Louise Gabriel
This is really cute! It reminds me of the story of The Little Red Hen -with repeating lines of "who will help me...." and no one would help. So the Little Red Hen served her own little chicks and herself and no one else got any! LOL
This is really cute and children would love it! Good luck with the contest.
Susan
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021
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This is really cute! It reminds me of the story of The Little Red Hen -with repeating lines of "who will help me...." and no one would help. So the Little Red Hen served her own little chicks and herself and no one else got any! LOL
This is really cute and children would love it! Good luck with the contest.
Susan
Comment Written 17-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much for this great review, it's very appreciated. :)
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
There was an old story called 'The Little Red Hen'. That's what your counting poem reminded me of. All the work was done by a few but ALL wanted to eat when it was time. Fun. Thanks!
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021
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Dear Mystery Writer,
There was an old story called 'The Little Red Hen'. That's what your counting poem reminded me of. All the work was done by a few but ALL wanted to eat when it was time. Fun. Thanks!
Comment Written 17-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021
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It's a reoccurring theme for sure...I just like cats and cookies, so that's the direction I took...lol. Thanks for this nice review. :)
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is Such a cute children's poem. Great flow and rhyme scheme. Very well written. The photo is adorable and goes well with your words. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021
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This is Such a cute children's poem. Great flow and rhyme scheme. Very well written. The photo is adorable and goes well with your words. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021
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Thanks so much. I'm a great fan of cats and cookies, so this was easy. :)
Comment from Teri7
This is a very cute and well written poem about the seven little kitties and the mischief they got into in the kitchen baking. You used very good descriptive words and very cute imagery from the art work you chose. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021
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This is a very cute and well written poem about the seven little kitties and the mischief they got into in the kitchen baking. You used very good descriptive words and very cute imagery from the art work you chose. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 17-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021
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Thank you for this very nice review. :)