Comment from RPSaxena

Excellent

Hello Sandramitchell,
Nice piece in continuation having impressive phraseology, smooth flow throughout from the beginning to the end, beautifully depicting an encounter of Tania and Colin and plans leading to the last paragraph which is working as a HOOK.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2021

Thank you so much for your lovely review, RP, I'm so pleased you enjoyed this part. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx

reply by RPSaxena on 21-Jan-2021

Sandra xx, Most Welcome!
With best wishes,
~ RP

Comment from Robert Zimmerman

Excellent

Hello Sandra.

It appears to have reached a life or death situation with Colin. He has turned the corner and prison is his future no matter what happens now. Desperate men commit desperate acts.

Robert

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2021

Thank you so much for your lovely review on this part, Robert. I think Colin has dug himself into a very deep hole. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx

reply by Robert Zimmerman on 20-Jan-2021

You're welcome.

Comment from muffinmama

Excellent

I haven't read the previous chapters, but this one kept the suspense high enough for me to be interested in reading more.
I'm Canadian so I would not notice British spelling and phrases; we learned them in school - LOL.
Waiting for the next installment.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2021

Thank you so much for reading this part and giving me this lovely review, muffinmama, (I love the chocolate muffins!) Is Canadian English is the same as ours in general? I have to put that at the end, because I had so many people pick me up on the spellings. They don't anymore!! Lol. Thank you for coming in and reading from this part. There is still quite a way to go. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx

Comment from Erika Seshadri

Excellent

Hello, I'm new to fanstory, and I'm finding all kinds of treasures on this site. This is such a juicy, dramatic piece of writing. I'm going to have to back to the beginning. are the rest of the chapters posted?

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2021

Hi Erika, welcome to FS! I'm sure you will love it here. Thank you so much for reading this part of my book, there is a long way to go yet, so I would love it if you continued to read it and let me know your thought on each part. Enjoy your writing! I'll come and take a look. Warm hugs, Sandra xx

Comment from Roxanna Andrews

Excellent

Oh dear, I do hope Tania isn't dead before they get to her. Glad then now have a plan and hoping Grant can come up with the question he needs to ask. Well done as always. Looking forward to the next chapter.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021

Thank you so much, Rox. We'll see if they can come up with a question, but as Grant said, her plans covered everything! We shall see. Warm hugs, dear friend. :)) Sandra xx

Comment from alexisleech

Exceptional

What a great chapter. The way you described Tania's anticipation of attacking her jailer had me right in the room with her. Similarly, the scene when Colin retaliates and ends up breaking her arm, had my eyes glued to the page as the odd expletive escaped my lips!

I can't wait for the next chapter.

Alexis xxx

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021

Thank you so very much for the lovely sixth star, and the wonderful review, Alexis. I'm so pleased you enjoyed reading it. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Oh my goodness! We left Tania in danger and her rescuers are clueless to where she actually is? I would think the thing would be for Grant to call Monica for help on information that only Tania might know? Hope his plan works!

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021

Hi Helen, thank you so much for your lovely review. No, Grant and Monica have no idea at the moment. Let's hope his plan works. But, first he needs to find that question, without that, they will never find her. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx

Comment from Cindy Warren

Excellent

Too bad she got his shoulder instead of his head. I doubt it would have knocked any sense into him, but one never knows. My guess is he's about to be caught. He won't be so tough when Grant's army buddies get hold of him.

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021

LOL, no, no one would like to face the team, they are a strong bunch and don't feel kindly to men who hurt women. Thank you, Cindy, for your lovely review. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx

Comment from Tpa

Excellent

I enjoyed your chapter, especially the fight scene. It contained plenty of action, very descriptive. The opening was great in describing her thoughts, and the ending was rewarding when they realized something happened to T. very nice read.

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021

Thank you for reading this part, Tpa, I'm so pleased you enjoyed the fight scene. Have a lovely day, and stay safe and well. :)) Sandra xx

Comment from greyson ernst

Excellent

this is really really good like all the other chapters when are you done this book or are you making like a big big book like 200 chapters if not more and as always keep writing and stay safe

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021

Thank you for reading this part, Greyson ernst. 200 chapters??? Goodness me, that would be a huge book! :)) Warm hugs. Sandra xx

reply by greyson ernst on 19-Jan-2021

ya but are you just about done?

reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021

No, this is only part 17. How many more parts do I have to do? I couldn't possible say. Only when I have put The End at the bottom of the last part, will I know. :))